I need some feedback on this Showcase I made

So I decided to build a mini town with roads and everything which took me 2 days. I decided to add a mini Christmas update recently and would love for you guys to give me some feed back on it!!
Here is the link to my game. Reeky'sTown. (Christmas update!!) - Roblox

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Hey mate, don’t mind if you can add some screenshots for us to get a first look at your showcase right before we go into the game. That’ll give a more heads-up of yours

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I wanted it to be a Suprise ; so you have to join to see.

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Looks pretty nice with the bulds. Looks simple but decent

What do you mean by simple? I mean I used some old build for it but how are they simple? I went for a cartoony look.

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It looks good! But the fountains are a little weird. Only the two closest to me shoot up. Is this on purpose?

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Wait what do you mean? I think its just that roblox or your computer aint loading in all the chunks. Because sometimes it wont load in all the chunks properly.

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Yeah, I think it’s just a roblox issue.

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Anyways, do you have any suggestions about what I should add ?

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Yeah! I think some more decoration in the middle would be nice, because there’s a lot of white space in the middle (between the r/b skyscrapers in the fountains). Maybe some Christmas trees?

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I did add a Christmas tree or wait let me check.

It’s okay but it’s kind of barebones. The houses are all copy-pasted so there’s not really a lot to look at, and there’s a lot of empty space where the “base” houses are.

A variety to the houses would be nice!

This is not really a showcase…Maybe a low poly build, but I can’t see it being a showcase.

I meant is that you’re is low poly type, I like the idea of the builds of it

How is it not a showcase? I went for a cartoony town style and can you provide me some things I should add or work on.

Wait can you provide me a image of where the empty gap is at in the “base” houses. Also the houses are not just copy pasted I added some changes to each of them so it won’t all look the same. Because it would be very difficult to build every single building and In my opinion I think its gonna look odd.