I want criticism on my choice of colours and style please. Please tell me how to improve as well

I really like these builds. I feel like for the kitchen there could be more detail in there, in my opinion it looks a bit plain and the seating area could have been done better.

I just realized that there is a bunch of open space, maybe add some more tables or something else or just leave it plain it kind of looks nice. The kitchen also could use things as a knife holder ( no idea what those are called with the wooden slots to hold knives).

Yeah still not done with kitchen there is a lot I am doing in blender to add to it.

We have these fun slidey doors here that my friend rigid scripted. https://gyazo.com/df094137a965da06dc51f9967f3e8fa4
A lot of stuff to do for the game we’ve only just begun!

Maybe you should change the sign, its a good joke lets be honest but I feel that it doesn’t fit the restaurant theme, I mean you can keep it if you want, its just a minor thing.

True I will speak to my friend about it considering he made it.

That is a cool door and that is a clean animation.

Man, that’s not how “criticism” works, that’s called being rude. Smh

I believe he was joking avtixe. Thank you for the thought though.

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This isn’t even logically possible in real life.
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The empty area makes it look bland.
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Why is the window touching the fence?

Will change that now, btw The empty area looks bland because the building is literally like 20% done I still have a long way to go. I am getting all the main buildings done, then the whole area is gonna be filled with stuff like street lamps… bus stops… benches… etc.

Thank you for the contribution I really appreciate it.

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You could add loads more minor details. It looks very plain and bland. Add trash cans, trees, and more. The colors also look way too similar. Add different colors, for the buildings.

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(Only talking about the “buy the way” exterior image)
The sign “Buy the Way” is hard to read because it’s a white color and the building is white. The road is also too geometric, even for low-poly. Maybe a straight line road would be better on the sign? The store itself is too boxy. Maybe make the roof slanted or add some dumpsters or exterior air conditioning on the right. Something to break up the box shape.

I was going to say I love the interior but I can’t so I won’t.

I think more decorations in the cafe building would look better like maybe a tv on the wall and some plants.

i like it, looks really cool, I personnally would make the white lines of road a bit less thick, that’ll make it look better for me :wink:

no matter the subject of the debate at hand, please move to #help-and-feedback since you’re asking for feedback on your build.

cool creations is simply for showcasing creations.

This is help and feed back. You’re killing me.

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As i said.

please remove it from cool creations

its the wrong category

I can’t really say much bad about it, just maybe add more decor.

@OneRubySky Thanks for the feedback! I’d like to keep the road the way it is honestly, it doesn’t feel right being just straight or bland, it might not even be clear it’s a road then. I’ve been battling the colors a bunch for it to look right, here are my options:

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All the colors I’ve tried in the gray range have been blending in with some part of the sign or the background and these are the only ones that feel comfortable reading, which do you think is best or do you have any color suggestions?