I want criticism on my choice of colours and style please. Please tell me how to improve as well

We are currently making a game. I don’t need to say the game, because it’s irrelevant.
I am trying to go for a lowpoly style, I am no where near done with the building I have a lot of work to do.
I want some feed back on the design and the colours I am currently using.

I **DO NOT ** want any positive feedback. I just want criticism please.make sure the criticism is necessary and truthful.





Were trying to create a player base for the game before we launch in a couple of months.
If you wanna join our discord here it is: Discord Just for anyone interested in anymore detail of the game.

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I’m loving the builds and most especially the inside! LOVE IT! The thing which I would want changed is having a new skybox/sky & have a better Lighting. The blur and the contrast just doesn’t add up. If you’re going with a catoony type style, I’d say have a cartoon style sky and change up the Saturation of your map a bit. Anyhow, looks fantastic, keep it up! :+1:

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It really depends what you are going for here with this build. Is it a role play restaurant & town? Is it something like Bloxburg? There isn’t much context for me to make remarks on.

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Roleplay restaurant game. There will be NPC’s which, players will have to cook burgers for and serve under a time limit.
This is our burger stacked up lol

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That’s just being rude. He means constructive criticism, not being a bully. You can also give suggestions of what you think would do better.

Yes, I did say I wanted negative feedback along with a reasonable way to improve. You state I need better colours, but what colours could I use? And I am not using any materials because it’s meant to have a lowpoly asthetic to it.

And the building is meant to look like a 5 year old made it, because it’s aged towards 7-8 year olds. You know half of roblox’s age group?

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You should add some shrubbery around the buildings and on the grass. Also your “Buy the Way” looks good, but it could use a couple of windows on the front; it looks kinda plain.

Btw simp this is my first time doing lowpoly, I can do 10x better with realistic builds.

I really think its perfect tbh I don’t know what you could change that wont make it look worse.

Thank you. My friend rigid thought the sign would be funny.
Also, we are going to be adding lowpoly trees made in blender and tons and tons of decorations around the streets. Like I said I have tons of things I have to do to this. I just want some feedback on the colour choices before it’s too late.

Simp you gave me exactly what I wanted it’s chill mate.

Positive feedback really gets me nowhere. But, hard cold facts that is what I like.

Maybe for the yellow change it to a darker yellow?

Very nice! There isn’t much you can improve on in that case. I know you said only criticism, but it looks good.

Will take that on board. Thank you.

In my opinion the colors are fine

Happy building!

Wait I notice that the floor in this image doesn’t look very nice: image

Perhaps change it to a tile floor like some of the others.

Bless ya. Thank you for the contribution matey.

Yea the floor is to realistic for low poly. I don’t think it’ll look to good considering the game is focusing on low poly!

That is true, I was thinking about that.