I Want some feedback on my 2D game

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#1

THIS CONTAINS SPOILERS
I am not talented at making games. I have put a lot of work into this game and I am wondering how well I have done. This game still has a lot to be made and there are a few things that are parts of a finished product. This game is inspired off of another game. I did give credit to the game my game is inspired off of.
Here is my game:
Hypnagogia

Here is a video of my game:
robloxapp-20230103-1931231.wmv (3.9 MB)

I have spent many, many hours working on the game but there is little progress as far as exploring. I have done 99% of the work on the game while the Co-Owner of my game developing group doesn’t do much. He did say it was a lot better than any other game that is in the group and that he really likes it. This game is made from parts and not UI. This game is meant to be artistic, calm, and simplistic.
Inspired off of the game “A Lucid Dream”

Here is a post I made earlier if you want to try and help me:
Earlier Post

Here is a poll for the game:

Rating For The Game
  • AMAZING 10 out of 10
  • Really Good 8-9 out of 10
  • Somewhat Good 6-7 out of 10
  • Decent 5 out of 10
  • Not Super Good 3-4 out of 10
  • Really Bad 1-2 out of 10
  • TERRIBLE 0 out of 10

0 voters

Should I open my game to the public now or wait a bit to fix some bugs and add more content? Ends on 1/10/2023
  • Yes
  • No

0 voters

I hope I to at least get above an average of 5 for everything I have put into this game.

I would rate this Really Good 8-9 out of 10 but that’s just me. Other people might think this is better or worse than that but that is what I would rate it if this game was brand new to me.

(This is my second time posting here)

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#2

It’s private, but just by viewing the video I feel the music and style fits it perfect to me This does have potential, with the GUI for the characters i do recommend trying to make it pixel like or less “circular” to fit the style of the game

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#3

SORRY EXIDENTLY CLICKED
is was amazing
but I wana know is that 3D or 2D?

I mean 3D looks 2D or
real 2D?

#4

I’ve actually seen this type of game concept of KonekoKitten’s video talking about it, the style looks pretty similar,

Its this one called “A Lucid Dream”:-

But anyhow, I’m a fan of the direction of the game, keep it up, I might just try it for myself as well when it goes public👍

#5

@GreenStom_I You can change your vote I think. I used parts that are 0.1 studs thick and then used some invisible parts that are 3 studs thick. The game is 3D but it looks 2D because all you can see are the 0.1 stud thick parts.

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#6

That game IS the game my game is based off of lol. I saw the same video. I wanted to make a game similar to it but different at the same time.

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#7

This game was not made using GUI. I can make stuff pixelated though if I put some effort into it. However that depends on what I decide to do. I’m trying to go for a simplistic and artistic style of game. I might do it, I might not. Also for the music I used some music I found on the creator market place and applied some effects to it to make it sound better. Some of those include reverb and distortion. Fun fact is that the music for the game makes my speakers glitch out.
This is the ID for the music: 1838012101

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#8

@Callum_Cloth @GreenStom_I @ViroTGP_YT Could I get your votes? Nobody is voting on my new poll. :pleading_face:

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#9

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then reselect to change your vote

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#10

Oh, made much more sense🙂. Thanks for letting me know!

#11

You’re welcome! :upside_down_face: (text needs to be put here so I can actually say this)

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#12

Can you pls make it public? It’s not at the moment.

#13

I want to have a semi finished game before I make it public again. I’ve added some cool stuff to the game, like cutscenes.

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