Not my best work yet, but hey its still good. I want to know your opinions on this build
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Looks really cool, although the pillows look a bit bloxy. Also looks a bit empty in the room.
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That bed is really, really thin.
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The room could use a light on the ceiling.
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Make the computer screen less bright. Looks like heaven itself is coming through the screen.
Add more details to the room, photos, stuff like that to make the room feel like it’s being lived in.
Maybe add a chair to the desk.
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That’s pretty good! I would just recommend these things though:
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Work on adding more decoration.
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Try to make the pillows and/or other items less bloxy.
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AAH! I forgot to add the pictures, the lamp, AND the chair!
That definitely sounds like me! I always forget to add something of some sort.
Mistakes happen, though!
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Looks really cool tho!
Perhaps the bed is too thin and seems to me like is too large maybe you could try adapting the bed to an rthro character to measure the size of it.
Shadows seem to be off, I would recommend you to make the computer emit light, and add shadows back (Unless they are on, and I can’t see them. About the computer screen, neon material is good to make that type of things, but adding a small touch of transparency might make the neon look better, try with 0,3 if you want.
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(The screen should have a bit of transparency so it looks a bit better)
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I love the design of the place! The table at the left corner looks great, the windows are incredibly pleasing to look at, and the room overall looks wonderful <3
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You should make the bed a little bit smaller though, it looks way bigger than the table which is not really realistic. Unless, if your bed really is that big, just make it a tiny bit smaller.
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You should also make the pillows less blocky, maybe use a mesh or add cylinders at the side so it adds some roundness.
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Use a plugin or replay your game to test out the size comparison to a robloxian, I have a feeling that the room is bigger than the player. Unless this is also what you’re going for to make the room pop out in the image.
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The support beams underneath the bed are small and cannot support the weight of the huge bed from that, try increasing their size to something more supportable.
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Add a light source in your room like a lightbulb, this can also contribute to more decoration because you can fill up a tiny portion on the wall with a light switch.
Again, bravo for making the furniture! It’s fantastic! :))
Yes the table is just very small
Looks pretty plain although I like where this build is going though
Some lighting on the overall build…
Besides the bed and the laptop on the desk, there’s still a lot of space on the floor, fill it up to make it look like its filled
I FORGOT THE foosball table! (however u spell it lol)
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Looks nice. Like others have said, the computers screen is too bright, and you need to add things to the room that make it look like its being lived in. Also the lighting feels a bit bland. Add a light to the ceiling in a way that the lighting isn’t fully even in all areas, like shadows and stuff. Good job!
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It’s supposed to be his irl bedroom, so adding stuff that isn’t there defeats the point
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The creator has said that they forgot to add some things… I also noticed that they have a desk with a computer in the room, but no chair. They also asked for feedback, just because it started as an irl room build doesn’t mean it can’t become something more.
Feedback doesn’t mean always adding things, feedback means feedback
And he could add those things, but not other things that aren’t there like Jonathan34786 said
True, but then it won’t be an irl bedroom later, it depends if he wants to keep it as his irl bedroom, if he doesn’t though, making it like this at first was no point, he might aswell make another bedroom
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