Hello
I have been building for almost 3 years. I want to improve, but I am not sure where I can improve. I am asking for some constructive criticism on my builds.
THIS IS THE CREATION I LIKE THE MOST!
I love the reflection of light, the material and the structure of the object.
Simply amazing, your creativity and skill impress me.
Your builds are amazing!
My only complaint is that in the first few builds the terrain doesn’t match very well with the builds. But overall you are a great builder! Keep up the good work!
They look very simple and plain. Don’t take this as something bad, this is nothing more than constructive criticism. Your models are missing complex shapes, something that will make them more unique. Right now they look like most places looked in 2016. When adding details try to give them depth, extrude them inside and outside, you’ll give it more detail. Add colors and darken some of the parts to give it that contrast effect
Well, good job for a start, in making such interesting builds, I’m actually I’m impressed since you have good building skills at the age of 14.
One thing, that I would like to give feedback about your builds, though, is that the windows of the structures in your builds lacks reflection and I noticed the windows are just color blue.
It would be really nice, if you could add some reflections for the windows of the structures you built, to make the glass really look attractive.
After checking a few of your current builds you seem to have made good progress, but some of the maps look simplistic and simple, perhaps if you plan to improve it more further you should include different objects instead of leaving a few areas bland and empty.
I like the large building and use of material and important parts but instead of a boring terrain showing the corner of a mountain include vegetation a house cottage something that’ll be more interesting or attractive to players eyes.
The starting maps and tree formation seem like an ok start at the moment, but change the tree formation use a variety of trees so it could give the terrain a bit more depth you could even include abandoned run down buildings since the land isn’t good and no human activity is going on mainly on the old and abandoned town or map. I’d consider making the map look more abandoned (unless that is already being planned out in the future?).
The terrain is completely flat in a few areas it won’t hurt to improve the quality of the maps include broken trees, bushes, houses, building things to give it that feel. In my opinion, simplistic builds are fine if you’re just starting off if you keep practicing and learning different skills and technique, you’ll become a talented builder - modeler, so great job so far.