I would like some feedback on this build

Well I just build this and would like some feedback for stuff I can add/remove or change on this build! :wink:
This is supposed to be a Teleporting-devise.(There will be some effects added later,this is just about the build itself :innocent: )


Have a nice day! :laughing:

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That is amazing! I have nothing bad to say! 9.5/10

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That looks so cool! I give 9/10 maybe a little more detail tho. Overall it’s awesome!

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Mans at it again huh?

Model after model, there all amazing. Great work dude. 9.5/10.

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Looks very sci-fi. Good build. Also, why’d you tag the post as “Scripting”?

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Sry,didn t notice that.:joy: Thx for pointing that out.

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It’s not a problem! All good :slight_smile:

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Ye I’ve been building a lot recently. I appreciate that you seem to like my builds :innocent:

Very nice! I have nothing else to say about it. 9.5/10

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Looks really good, maybe add a big power supply/battery?

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Something like this? :joy:

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I was thinking something round and big like a giant AA battery (it’s a teleportation device after all :smile:)

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Well the top-part ist supposed to be that bigger Energie-Core


The Core is powered by a battery.

But of course one can’t be enough,that’s why something like this is nearby,to fill up.
That’s why I didn’t feel like building another bigger energie-source,I hope that’s a good response :sweat_smile:

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It feels like there are too many metal plates. Maybe add some plain metal in places, maybe some canisters here and there for some more detail.

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that’s amazing! nothing to nitpick here, though I would prefer the neon colour to be white-blue.

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Looks great! My suggestion would be using decals as textures on the metal making it seem more shiny. That is if you’re going for a realistic future style, Other than that it looks great!

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For the people that want to see where the Portal is now! :innocent:

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Wow… I love Neon it gives it a futuristic vibe. Well done.

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Lol just noticed u responded twice,u rlly seem to like this one :stuck_out_tongue:

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yup :smile:, what it the game about?

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