Ice Mountain Cafe

Intro
Hey guys, so, some of you may remember an old ROBLOX game called “Ice mountain cafe”
I loved this game as a child and spent countless hours there socialising.
I wanted to use the idea to re-create my own take on it!
I’m not the most experienced builder, but i love to build things i’m passionate about!

Model use
I am currently in the process of making more of my own assets to replace some of the models i used. The models i used in the cafe include lights, plants, and a few other random decorations which will be replaced in due time
There is also a lounge area in the works, which is mainly models. (I use models to piece together an idea of the room before i build )

So, i’d love ideas + feedback to help the inspiration flow with this build!

My Ideas
Please give feedback on the ideas i also have for the cafe.

  1. Add another room for seating, as the size of the cafe is currently small.
  2. Add music, I can’t script yet, and can’t seem to find a music system i like well!
  3. Integrate a cafe system/give to system. (nightmare for me! :frowning: )
  4. Add other rooms, such as the WIP lounge to increase size and give players more rooms to explore, chill and chat.

Game Link
Ice Mountain Cafe (Thumbs up please!)

Outro & Goodbye
ANY feedback, good or bad will be noted and appreciated!
Please leave a thumbs up to support the development of my first project :slight_smile:
Thanks for reading my post, and thankyou for (hopefully) checking out my project!
Have a great day, stay safe and positive through these trying times, and happy building!
:grin: :grin: :grin:

3 Likes

Real nice so far!

The biggest problem I see is the starting area. Some of the terrain is a bit wonky and it’s possible to get out of bounds. You can fix that with either a invisible roof or decrease the game’s max slope angle.

I also think the spawn area should have a sign or arrow. I love the tunnel into the underground cafe, it just seems a little lacking in direction.

Everything else is fantastic! Keep up the good work!

For those of you who won’t have the time to look in the game and want screenshots, I took the time to take screenshots of the whole place.

Screenshots/Gayzo/Preview

Spawn:


Go through the path and this is the entrance to something:


Entering through the doorway




Next room from doorway

View outside window


https://gyazo.com/59db5270ac7eb7cccf6b0a51e550387a


Main Room
https://gyazo.com/0289ab2c6ce9c6e9496efb44ea7273c6


https://gyazo.com/5d1631ee8ff19f4b11b4504eadc917b8
https://gyazo.com/b21fe2a454858f8d8a543e809944d40d
https://gyazo.com/e925f83099e4fc64e299e524fe7d87a6



https://gyazo.com/9e9611936a3c6d40efbda9e87b2f984d?token=a693920f626bb37d0014674f9e25ea23

2nd Floor

https://gyazo.com/d8a9d3b27ceee58fd4af9fccb2cb69b2

Now time for the feedback I have :smile:
This is an amazing build! It’s very small but detailed mostly. I really like the use of neon lights, plants, and water.


The overall build is very nice and aesthetic. I can’t wait to see further updates!

2 Likes

I suggest using some textures to make it more nice! so far looks epic!!!

The Ice Mountain Cafe
This cafe, overall, looks really amazing. There is a lot of detail to this cafe and it shines the most with your models that you created. I like how you made neat little things to the walls to make them stand out.
There was no vacant space that I saw, so everything was filled with your amazing work that you made.

Things that were a bit off
I think some parts of the cafe are way too bright. It can get to me at times.
Screenshot below is what I’m referencing.

1 Like

Thankyou so much!
I believe its the bloom from the Realism plugin.
I appreciate your feedback so much , and the support means everything :slight_smile:

for your game to get better should leave more HD and less light