Ivecarus
(Ivecarus)
March 28, 2021, 12:37pm
#1
Hey developers,
Today I would like to present you my Icon Commission for a CAFE Roleplay game!
ANY TYPES OF FEEDBACK ARE WELCOME!
The Icon
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MY PORTFOLIO - https://devforum.roblox.com/t/ltsme-rblx-graphic-designer-open/1016989?u=ltsme_rblx
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Hello there I like it alot but one thing you can tone down is the bright white light in the back ground as you can not see the hat very well.
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As @bobtheSeptember672 said above, try reducing the brightness, and maybe add some Ambient Occlusion. (if there isnt yet)
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Very smooth GFX! I think that it looks great. Good job!
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Ivecarus
(Ivecarus)
March 28, 2021, 12:43pm
#5
Hello there, I appreciate and understand your feedback but the icon was demanded to be bright and I intentionally add more brightness and the side because the sunrays are pointing at the character.
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Also Try showing off the detail little bit and try to make the Text more to stand out as the brightness is taking it over
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Ivecarus
(Ivecarus)
March 28, 2021, 12:44pm
#7
Thank You very much glad you liked it !
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Two things,
No.1) Too bright
No.2)The face of the rig in the icon(its too much😳), maybe replacing with the smiling face, that’ll make it better
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Lie_Star
(Lie_Star)
March 28, 2021, 8:49pm
#9
Maybe make character bit more noticeable? Like make everything around them is bit darker or add rays at the back. Anyway I love your work, it looks great, goodluck!
Ivecarus
(Ivecarus)
March 29, 2021, 2:47am
#10
Thank u very much glad u liked it !
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ChimpDev
(Skylar)
March 30, 2021, 7:30pm
#11
It’s cool! I love the graphic, though the text is a bit funky? Maybe you could add some effects to it?
Wowza! So clean! Smooth! Also the coffee cup looks like its made of metal.
the face of the rig is used commonly in gfx, whats wrong with it?