So,
I’ve been working on this icon for my game for around an hour and I would like to know if you would click on it. Feedback and criticism would be very much appreciated.
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The Text looks cool. Maybe you should replace the Roblox character with a backround that represents the game
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It’s more of like a simulator-obby game so I don’t really know what to put that could actually look good.
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Yea but people don’t know what the game is about then…
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It looks good but it lacks POI.
Right now, my eyes get drawn to the Roblox character, but the game is not about that. I think the background need something that resembles the title of the game so the player knows what they are getting themselves into when they do click your game.
As @davy_tornato stated, as of the icon right now, I do not know what for game it is. All that I know is that there is a conveyor thus I can not be certain that it is a genre I like. This can result in a loss of possible clicks.
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Thanks! I will try to look stuff I can add. Also, should I go for a more cartoony theme or a more realistic theme in the icon?
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Your game is low-poly and the letters on the icon are cartoon, so I suggest sticking with those themes.
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Okay, Thanks for the feedback! I’m just new to the cartoony genre of Roblox and this is actually one of my first low poly build and cartoony ui design. Is there any tutorial on YouTube or the DevForum that you would recommend?
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I would prefer your new icon over the old one. It has something to look at, even if it’s the background. You can change the background with each update you do to get old players to return. Good job on the icon.
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imo you should remove the random character, it doesnt add anything to the icon and the lighting on the character is very dark and dull which makes the icon look very gloomy.
You should make a new 3d render of a character doing something obby related with more bright colorful lighting.
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Hello there! I love the logo, it’s nice, but I think the character might be a teensy bit unnecessary. Instead of it being the random character in the front, maybe you can show it doing the obby/sim that you created!
A logo is what Roblox players first see about your game, and while the background looks nice, I only get from the text that it’s about the conveyor obby/sim. Hope that helps with something. 
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