I'm looking for feedback on my first ever game

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#1

I’m currently working on an obby game and looking for feedback! This is my first ever Roblox game and it’s still a WIP. I hope you like it AmorceCraft's Extremely Easy Obby - Roblox

#2

Can we have pictures, link, anything? I’m not supposed to say “I like it very much” when I don’t even know anything about it.

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#3

You can find it on my profile page

#4

Okay, but in the future link it. I’d rather have spent that time playing it than having to search for it

#5

I edited it now to say the link.

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#6

Alright, here’s my feedback:
It’s pretty bland. I have no reason to continue, or at all, to play.
It’s pretty good as a beginner though(did you make your own assets?)

#7

It looks and feels like those copy and paste money grab obbies. I hate the pick the right path stages especially when you have a long re-spawn time. I would recommend making more unique stages and build a theme around the obby kind of like what Obby Island did.

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#8

Here’s my honest opinion: it’s just another obby.

You should try to implement a shop or something. It will teach you further about GUI design and scripting. You should also add music to make it seem like a ‘fun hangout’, not some bland virtual obstacle course. And it takes forever to respawn.

To me, obbys are too easy to make as a first game. There’s no challenge and you aren’t pushing yourself to become a better developer. Try to make a game that will require you to learn more things you can use to make a good game.