Hi! I’m making a FNAF fan game I just finished the office the game is supposed to take place in an animatronic factory by the way.
Here it is!
If you respond thanks for responding!
(btw there’s allot of memes on the wall cause I thought it would be funny)
(also stuff may change to make it look better I just need feedback to improve it)
That is cool, but it feels like everything is floating in a void. Maybe add some kind of wall or floor texture, or just build one. Also making a chair like that is kinda impressive if you’re using the f3x- anything curved is hard to make with it. I’m no building expert, but I seem to be able to decently review and criticise things. I hope this is good enough for you!
Also a fan would be kinda cool, just a thought but it sounds difficult- I mean like- an office fan, by the way
Looks great, but some issues.
The laptop is blocking the view of the door.
My opinion but it feels pretty empty, I’d say to shrink the room a bit.
Theres no textures, I recommend a checker pattern floor you can see in the real game. (Add dust, or small texture details if you want to spice it a bit.)
I have nothing else to say, pretty decent.
Looks pretty alright so far but could be pretty forgettable - You can definitely make it feel more lived in with more personality with things like
stuff like that goes a long ways to make a place feel more realistic.
and I agree with @gianmarco2712 with the room being too big and lacking textures
ok sure a floor texture would add some more details thanks for the feed back really appreciate it
the game is going to be similar in style to nightmare in the sewer where you can roam around the office freely and shrinking the room could help a lot so I have less empty space and some floor details would go a long way I was kinda already thinking about the checker floor any ways thanks for the feedback dude 
In the game the room would be air conditioned so maybe not a fan ( I still haven’t added the air conditioner) book covers would be good moody lighting would be a good thing too ill add that later since I still haven’t scripted the animatronics and more wall things would help as well thanks for the feedback! (edit: a fan would probably make more sense since the room has a vent i might consider adding a fan and scrapping the air conditioner thing)
um nice but personally it feels empty
Garbage. That’s what you NEED in your office, not what it is. Got you, right? Heh, anyways. FNaF offices have a tendency of owning a lot of garbage, whether it’s on the walls, ceiling or floor, it’s all the same! You should fill it up with a lot of garbage. You should also have moody lighting, so you need yellow lights. Make sure your office is also a bit smaller, this way it feels like you’re may less of a threat and you’re more in danger. Make sure to do these things, and I think you have a good looking office on your hands.
Keep on going, and make sure that it fits!
