Hey,
I recently published a game named 
Falling Fruits and I need feedback on the game and how I can improve it/how can I make it grow with spending almost no robux.
I also published videos on tiktok, youtube, youtube shorts about the game and its trailer (blushney on all platforms)
Iām planning a lot of things for the game!
(give your feedbacks here)
Any feedback is welcomed (even ābadā ones) 
hi, so before you take any of my advice iāve never had a popular game and i probably wonāt ever, but there are some things that stick out.
Seeing that you are already trying to get the game out there, some things must be addressed immediately:
The game only has one thumbnail and itās stretched and in low resolution. I recommend having at least 2 with them being high quality. (You can use Canva to expand any screenshots of the game you have)
The game has a moderated icon, so players wonāt find it easily and will be more likely to ignore it in the algorithm.
Okay iāll get to the actual game though!!!
The game itself has a nice aesthetic, I see youāre going for the brainrot genre.
The game is far too easy, even for little kids. Slightly expand the fruit hitbox without increasing the size of the fruit and that should be good.
Iād make it so a player has a limited amount of lives rather than infinite (that they can pay robux to revive back / buy a gamepass for infinite lives)
rounds last too long, a generous 6-7 minutes would be best.
sometimes, fruit gets stuck and permenantly blocks paths / lags the game. I suggest simply using AddItem on them in DebrisService when spawning fruits.
Jumping is a core mechanic of roblox, to remove jumping youād need to substitute it with another control (E.G. doors adds crouching instead of jumping). If you donāt plan on adding some other movement, I suggest adding a weaker jump back into the game.
daily rewards in your game are a bit confusing, I didnāt know why i couldnāt claim during a game. Also, timed rewards stay at 1 second for some reason, itās an easy fix however
As for the wheel, I donāt mean to be a party pooper but if youāre going to sell a paid random item without any given chances (while also not stating it in your questionnaire) youāre breaking robloxās tos. Sure, you wonāt get banned when the game is niche, but if you do ever pop off you would need to change it immediately.
(no chances shown)
As for the lobby, there is no lobby. I recommend simply having NPCs as stands to the shops that already have GUIs on your screen. Or even a group reward to get people to join your group.
Now, some suggestions mightāve seemed like no-brainers, I just mentioned them because you stated youāre trying to get your game out there. Thatās all from me, good luck on development.
Hey, I want to thanks you for the HUGE Paragraph and how detailed it is!
I was planning on doing more quality thumbnails without spending anything as Iām VERY low on budget! (Iāll probably try canva)
Talking for the icon, I donāt think itās moderated as itās displaying great for me and my friends.
āIād make it so a player has a limited amount of lives rather than infinite (that they can pay robux to revive back / buy a gamepass for infinite lives)ā I was planning to do that but wanted to see how the game logic would go like it is as of right now but Iāll probably do a system like this!
ārounds last too long, a generous 6-7 minutes would be best.ā Will modify this.
I didnāt know about DebrisService until now and will try to master it for this game/future games.
āJumping is a core mechanic of roblox, to remove jumping youād need to substitute it with another control (E.G. doors adds crouching instead of jumping). If you donāt plan on adding some other movement, I suggest adding a weaker jump back into the game.ā, Iāll see whatās the best fitting and test different things (weak jump might be the way to go).
ādaily rewards in your game are a bit confusingā, going to make it more easier to understand and going to fix the overall bugs that Iāve noticed.
As for the wheel, theyāre all the same chances, going to a label precising this! (thanks for the reminder!!)
āAs for the lobby, there is no lobbyā, Was going to make one but had no ideas. You gave me ideas for the lobby!!
anyways, thanks you so much for detailing everything and taking your time
this is the icon by the way
thanks for taking my words into consideration, i wish you the best for your game since its a unique idea that could definitely blow up.
Hey, I got a last question, Iāve been thinking a lot about doing scripting commissions for irl money by doing tasks but I still donāt know, can you recommend me/tell me a little bit about the commissions world? (like what is recommended for payments, how can I not get scammedā¦) or if you have any video that could help me out
so right off the bat i unfortunately donāt know any videos, but there are bound to be some dev forums posts already about your question. Second, I heavily recommend you take jobs from the Talent Hub, if you werenāt already aware about it. Simply make your profile and your skills and wait until your profile gets verified.
The thing is youāll most likely have to go look for postings yourself rather than being messaged, but it shouldnt be a problem. When you end up getting a position, unless they pay you right away (which is 9/10 not the case) you should not work in their own game.
Also, when making module functions for other people, make sure to specify the type of variable itās receiving. If you donāt, it wonāt be a big deal, but itās to ensure satisfactory results.
Ex:
Like mentioned before, donāt do any work directly in their game without pay first, you are bound to get scammed. If they insist on paying out afterwards, you need to request any assets that are required for the system they want you to make (E.G. rock meshes and a pickaxe for a mining system) and go into a dummy game to create the system. Then, showcase them your work (NOT BY PLACING IT IN THEIR GAME) and request pay before giving them the asset. Communicate with your client to ensure your system works in their game before they give you a negative review.
As a small time developer, you should base your pricing very generously, even if you think your skill is expert-level. Iād put your skill level a little above mine, and Iād say your work is worth about 500 robux every hour. Before working for anyone, ask what they want completed and determine how long itāll take you, then state your price accordingly. Most of the time, however, job postings are be very generous for requests you can do in about an hour, so donāt downgrade your price and let them tell you how much theyāll pay haha.
The good thing about the Talent Hub aforementioned is that you need to be verified in order to take/post jobs, so there is minimal risk for scammers. If the consumer sounds like a child or speaks broken english, I donāt recommend you take the job unless they pay you right away.
Thanks you so much for taking your time to help some random guy on the internet! Anyways, Iāll try doing commissions and will always remember about your words. (also thanks for the Var types as Iāve seen it sometimes but never knew what it did!!!)
If I succeed into the ācommissionā world, Iāll let you know!
great!
no problem, I forgot some important things if I donāt relay them onto other people; so it benefits me too!!
definitely let me know if you get into it.
TWO THINGS I FORGOT TO MENTION:
read into OOP (just search OOP roblox)
if youāre working full time for a published game, make sure to ask for game commission rather than one time payments
Will do! Have a nice day/night!
By the way, do you have any good payment method for people that are 17? (not paypal as itās 18+)
And if I find a task/game hard but can probably do it, should I do it and that if I fail in doing so, Iāll just tell them to not pay me anything and try another task or just do what Iām mostly able to do?
hmm so this is definitely debatable. iād say itās on a spectrum, if you are 80% sure you can do it let them know beforehand that it might not be satisfactory and turn down the price.
anywhere below 60% sure you should drop the task.
If you donāt want to be paid in robux, you might as well use CashApp, Iām personally not familiar with CashApp but Iām pretty sure you donāt need a physical card in order to receive money. Regardless, you can order a physical card for free if youāre 13+ (which you are.
This will make it a bit difficult to get job postings though, as most people are just like me and you and most likely wonāt have CashApp. Whatever fits you best though, if itās a large project I suggest taking CashApp since Roblox will take 70% of all payments.
That reminds me, the Talent Hub doesnāt have any built in way to pay someone in full with robux, youāll have to create a gamepass or asset the person can buy.
Cashapp is banned in my country Iām pretty sure (France)
In that case, you may have to use Apple Pay or Wise. Apple Pay does severely limit you, but Iām pretty sure Wise can be used in most countries and can be transferred to Google Pay.
Alright, Thanks you so much once again!
