Made some artwork about the metaverse of ROBLOX! This is also a practice to learn more about effects and photoshop! What do yall think? Feedback is also apperciated aswell?
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This looks amazing! I can’t see anything that could really be improved!
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It looks like the character doesn’t have hands because the sleeves are too long. If you change that, then I don’t see anything else that can be changed.
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It’s not thro though, that’s what characters are supposed to look like
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What I mean is that the sleeve should be a bit shorter.
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This is legend.
I love the effects you used
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Looks like the Metaverse is coming towards us. Love the artwork!
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Looks very realistic and I love the photoshop details! Very unique and well made!
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I think I see a spot for my character on that boat haha. You can absolutely call yourself an artist, amazing artwork!
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Looks amazing, the only problem I can see is that at the bottom of the portal the image cuts off before the ring. But even then, that’s me just nitpicking, good job. 
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This looks really nice! Great job! 
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Love it! Amazing job! Are you for hire?
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Thanks for the feedback man! The reason the plane is cut off is so that way the portal is coming off of the clouds, so I just wanted to give it a bit more depth! However, I appreciate your feedback, much appreciated! 
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Looks awesome! My only criticism is the character lighting is a little strange. Also, did you get that portal design from Dr. Strange (Marvel)?
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This gives me an idea. Has anyone heard of web rings? They were a way websites used to gain exposure before search engines. A website owner would join a web ring and put a snippet of JavaScript in his pages that would add a set of links to other sites participating in the ring. Users would then find a site on a particular topic, then navigate to other sites by clicking one of the links added by the web ring.
You could jump from site to site on the same topic simply by following the web ring links.
Now imagine if different Roblox developers did the same thing with their games using stylized portals that teleported players to other participating games.
Looks amazing! You did a great job with it!
In my opinion the “magic circle” doesn’t look very cool, it seems like a stretched out fire effect. Try adding more flames and sparks, and perhaps make it look more like Dr. Strange’s magic circle thing of which I forgot what it’s called. To be honest it sort of seems like you referenced off of this, although I’m not sure.
It looks bland overall, add more light and contrast, and make the landscape inside the portal look more like something you would walk into instead of free fall into, for instance, the ground of the forest instead of the sky of the forest.
Like I have said before, try adding more lighting, sparks, and a better landscape inside the portal. That would make the art look a lot better than it is right now. Another thing I would recommend is to make the non-lit parts of the image darker, while the lit parts are brighter, it sort of adds a cool effect.
Overall it’s decent, but does have several noticeable flaws.
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Wow! Thanks for thr feedback man! Definitely will take note of similar things in future projects!
And no I did not refrence off of Doctor Strange, this is a photo manip.
I think it’s to give the feel that it’s rotating.