Intro GUI - Feedback

Hi everyone, I spent around 20 min creating this UI including animations, etc. It is meant to be around a 20-second intro GUI that just allows the player’s computer to load into the game… while keeping them entertained with animations.

Any tips?

https://www.roblox.com/games/4188322540/Belmond-Resort-Spa-v3-Early-Access

The green things that go from side to side doesn’t fit in, and it doesn’t seem to catch my attention. And the colors don’t really fit in, and maybe make the loading a bit shorter, 20 seconds seems a bit overboard. Just saying that a lot of improvement is needed(sorry if I hurt your feelings). But I can see that you spent a lot of time on it. Keep up the hard work!

Hello developer good to start has great job only that the green bars do not fit there you could improve it using load bar from 1 to 100 in my opinion in good you did a great job :slightly_smiling_face:

I did not get an intro GUI, only a phone at the bottom of the screen.

When I joined I didn’t get an Intro, did you remove the intro all together or did you mess up your scripting? The only thing I saw was the phone in the bottom left.

Sorry about that, lemme switch the game:

https://www.roblox.com/games/4188322540/Belmond-Resort-Spa-v3-Early-Access