Introduction sequence to my short horror game

Hi, I’m making a game about The sun and I made this cool intro for it inspired by “It Steals” (phenomenal horror game btw, go buy it)

Here’s a clip of the introduction sequence playing out fully (+ a bit of exploration)

Here’s also an image I made, just to tease a bit

What do you all think? Can I improve something? What would you change if you were doing this? Any comments?

(I’m still not 100% sure of what the game will turn out to be)

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apparently streamable doesn’t embed anymore, incredible
image

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Looks quite interesting, I really wish I could say that I can test this game, if it comes out. But I’m deathly afraid of even the simplest horror games.

Just for the instructions at the beginning of the game, they seem a bit quick, and you probably should add a fading animation when the last instruction is given.

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My aim was to make the instructions… abrupt, for lack of a better word. Though I have considered making the text appear for longer, particularly the last one.

I appreciate the suggestion, though

Is this inspired by It Steals? Seems very similar.