What can I improve on?
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Adding windows would be a good start also the C on the candy sign seems a bit too far away from the ANDY also maybe add some reflectance or neon too the doors also try adding like potted plants or something, anyway good luck with your future builds.
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Thank you, The door is neon but it is toned down, I will add some reflectance.
yes the C looks much better now, just I recommend working on the windows next
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Make the C thinner and maybe make the D have straight edges on the left.
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I would suggest making the text more consistent. It’s like they all have different fonts.
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I suggest changing the color scheme of the building, the white frame and handle for the door and the grey door itself don’t match the red and orange building. Also, making it bigger will help since the letters look cramped. It is hard to distinguish if the “D” in the word is either a “0” or a “D”. If this is supposed to be a candy shop or similar, give it more hints or details of a candy shop. Some references here;
You could implement candies on the sign or top of the building.
Another reference;
Candy machines outside could also help.
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