Is this a good 1st map render?

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[iMournn (avery)]

Aside from some noticable Z-fighting, it looks amazing. Although I would recommend adding shadows for that ‘lively’ effect, it still looks amazing without shadows.
Great house by the way.

[aTinyGecko (TinyGecko)]

For a first? Yes, it looks amazing for your first map render!