Is this ad ok? My first ad yet


I want to spend about 40-100 robux on this ad. Do you think ANYBODY would click on it? (It’s my first ad) I’m only looking to profit not make like thousands of sales. The pants currently have 81 sales, but I haven’t advertised it.

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i don’t think single clothes promoting was ever profitable in the last 7 years,
The best way you can have a positive outcome is to promote the group itself or a Homestore with various choices & purchases possible.

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So, like have multiple items that are my best sellers in the ad, and that’ll be fine? And can I get feedback on the ad itself?

Not to be rude or anything, but I have 2 things to say.
1) This just isn’t a good looking ad. It just isn’t visually appealing enough for anyone to want to click it. Try using more vivid colors, and use YouTube tutorials to help you make better looking ads, so you’re not wasting your robux.
2) Putting up an ad that looks like this for just 40-100 robux isn’t gonna be enough. You’re gonna end up not getting many clicks bc of the quality of your ad, and that would mean you are just throwing away 40-100 robux on a bad ad.

I hope this was some ok critiquing, and I hope you heed my advice and go for a better ad with a higher bid. You’ll get a higher CTR ratio that way then running this one

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This is not that great of an ad. Nobody buys single piece clothing anymore, the watermark is too big, and the text is hard to read. It looks TOO amateur. I’m not saying this to try and be mean either, just it is an overall not good looking advertisement. Please, fix this. It’s not appealing to the eye and the colors don’t mesh what so ever.

Take an ad like this for example:


Although it looks a bit amateur, it keeps to a theme when it comes to color. It doesn’t show the grey character modeling the clothing. It’s direct, get’s to the point with the littlest amount of words possible. I would click on something like this if I wanted to look for this type of clothing.

Look at this ad:


Yet again, this one isn’t that bad. It grabs the eye, and although it doesn’t get to the point or follow a color pattern, it is entertaining. This appeals to people because it’s something new players can understand, and some of the more immature kids on ROBLOX can laugh at.

It all deals with who you’re marketing to. You aren’t marketing to anyone. I don’t think anyone would buy that clothing item. I personally wouldn’t even click on it. This ad needs to be changed, pronto.

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Hello! I’d recommend looking at other clothing advertisements to get a good idea of what it should look like. It should look pleasing. As well as this, maybe try and improve on your editing. There are loads of Youtube videos on it.

And when you’re going to do your advertisement, do not put it up for 40 - 100. It’ll be a waste of Robux. Try and do at least 300 - 1000. It will get more people.

It’s not bad for a first attempt, and you should keep trying different methods to find the right one for you! I hope you have a nice day.

Not very eye catching, seems kind of plain. Try thinking about what can get people to click

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