Recently, I was wondering if this place was looking good? Currently I don’t know how to improve it what I did, but I know what I want to add next, also the place is only a test, I will see later if it could be a game or not, but for now I need to know what you think about it.
Place Pictures:
Wow man this place is looking very good, are you going to add like houses in the maps. Or are they all in one whole game map? But to me this is a really good map you did, you can also make the trunks look full low poly. To me they look like blocks placed as the trunk but this is really good keep it up man like to see the final game soon.!
Look great to me, keep on developing.
It is artistically pleasing to the eye but apart from that, the fact that most of the colours seem homogeneous can make the place very dull very quickly, especially since it is so large and open. Essentially, you will require objects and different colours along the way to attract interest (differing shades of green, brown, grey, etc.). Right now, as everything is so plain and similar, that doesn’t seem to be the case.
On the second image, the rocks are categorically different. The rocks that border the river at the base appear copy and pasted and are different in colour to the cliffs. This makes that location look somewhat silly and I would highly recommend using a different rock appearance.
Other than that, it looks good. 
I’d experiment with the lighting, try out a variety of different water colors till it matches the environment better.
Currently the present level design resembles the generic simulator, obby. If it’s an obby than the level will have to be adjusted to fit a range of difficulties (easy,medium,hard etc). If it’s a simulator than I’d focus on planning out the roadblocks, extending the map through creative alternatives. I.e using the lava themed level instead of just making the length longer you could add a temple or underground passage.
Adding on to this, a large proportion of rocks used in game these days are meshes/mesh parts or unions (I wouldn’t recommend unions for performance purposes). If you’re unfamiliar with blender, and unions than there’s a variety of open sources to choose from in the toolbox however be advised the meshes open sourced aren’t 100% guaranteed to had been optimized for gaming performance due to high polycount(s).
This place looks GREAT (I never would be able to build something like this). However in this picture:
I like the style you went with nd how smooth it is, this is great!
The low poly theme of this map is great on the eyes, I really appreciate how you chose to use pastel colors that greatly complemented each other in order to maintain the same theme throughout.
Love the use of the Smooth texture and the low-poly feel I get from this. My only suggestion is to keep away from making everything symmetric. Otherwise, amazing work friend, can’t wait to see future progress! 
It looks soy good! It feel a lot like deathrun maps!
It looks pretty good so far to me! I have a couple of ideas you can consider to help improve it:
Hope these help, great job so far, keep it up!
The place looks awesome! The only suggestion I have is adding more than two colors in every different zone.
Thank you all for your replies.
Maybe make some trees and other scenery a slightly darker colour or tilt the trees slightly so it looks as if it was alive. Try making small stones in the stepping stones in the first picture.
I really like the start of it and its simplicity is amazing. Keep it up!
Since there’s always more that you can add to your build to improve it, you can certainly add more! I’d suggest that for each area’s border, you can add some trees and/or something that makes it look more natural, so that’s something you should certainly add to make it look good, but overall, I really enjoyed viewing this build!
