Alright, so, I built an island and I’d like some feedback! It’s a simple build, and I’m still working on it and constantly updating it. I would do some screenshots but I don’t really feel like it. Check it out? test - Roblox
Hello MrLeosh
I took a look at your island, there is not much to say as there is not a lot of things. However I noticed some stuff.
First of all, I noticed some collision issues sometimes such as shown in this picture :
That little house or whatever it is called, seems a little bit small compared to players, maybe make it a bit higher ? ( the roof almost touches my head )
also be carefull about overlapping parts, especially on the multiple rocks with the fishing rod
There is also small mistakes about the Building of the map :
And also since it seems like it is snowing a lot, you could add some fog to add thickness to the snow falling down
It would look pretty nice in my opinion
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My advice use the terrain mesh, it’ll give you much better sand and water effects out of the box…
I dont really like the way terrain looks
Well, thats actually rain and also thats just the spawn where you’re floating but I’ll fix some of the stuff you said. Thanks for pointing out the rock thing.
Oh my bad sorry, I was not sure if it was rain or snow actually since the shape and speed was like rain but the color and environment was white and snow so yeah.
Goodluck for your island, keep improving !
You’re welcome
lol its fine thanks 30harrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
But you used the terrain texture? XD lol ok its up to you
They’re different things but ok…
Hi MrLeosh
I can’t say too much about the terrain or the shape of the island since it sounds like you haven’t finished. I appreciate it’s a simple build, but I’ve noticed a couple of areas that lack quality whilst some areas don’t.
I can’t be too specific since it’s your build, not mine, but I think you should add more detail to the roof and walls, and I think it’s worth having some sort of detail which fleshes the door out a bit more. It might be worth looking for a reference image to work from. Personally, I think it would be a cool idea if you had a window, maybe, allowing players to see something inside the room, just to add depth to the world a bit more. That might not be appropriate though if you intend on keeping your build simple.
Again, it’s quite hard to tell what this is meant to be due to the lack of detail. If it’s some sort of fence then, again, it could do with a little more detail. It’s probably worth joining the parts together in some way.
Again, I think it’s worth just going over this bit and adding some more detail to the sign.
In terms of the section in the image below, I felt as if this section was of higher quality than the rest of the build (I feel as if having more pieces of the build, such as with the lights, wires and trusses give it more depth).
To summarise, I honestly think it’s a decent start but I think it’s important you make the quality consistent throughout.
Thanks, will do! 30charrrrrrrrr
ok I added real terrain, and it looks a bit better
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I think it looks way better. did you know you can also control how high the waves are and the colour of the terrain in the terrain panel. it looks pretty stormy maybe the water should be a bit darker with bigger waves?
Cool, I will try that for sure! Thanks!
Omg the waves look amazing now, thanks
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Lol its amazing how much stuff roblox hides away in the sidebar XD XD
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