Hey there! I’m SheezeBlox and I’ve recently made some more stages for my Obby-Game
If you wanna check it out, there’s the link:
https://www.roblox.com/games/7385235093/HUGE-UPDATE-Cool-Super-Obby-30Stages
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Hello!
Your game is alright. Due to some unforeseen circumstances, I couldn’t critique much, but I do have some stuff to report on.
Suggestions & Bugs
While the game is playable at first, Stage 21 is non-collidable. This makes it impossible to get past the stage, leaving you stuck at Stage 21.
A suggestion I’d like to make is that maybe add an arrow to the next stage spawn. For example, let’s say you are at Stage 5. There would be an arrow pointing at the spawn for Stage 6. I think this would be easier to tell where to get to, especially for those who are younger audiences.
There also isn’t any music nor sound effects playing, other than the default Roblox sound effects. I would also suggest to add some music, so that it doesn’t sound so plain.
The Verdict
I do think this game needs improvement, and this game is unplayable past Stage 21. So, I can’t really critique much. But overall, it’s good for the first few minutes.
Keep working on it, and good luck on development! 
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I like the style of the roblox game, keep going!
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Thanks for your feedback! Should be fixed now.
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Now I’ve got more time for replying. I am Going to add the Arrow for sure and I’ll add some music too(Probably a skip stage button aswell). I made the first stages more simple Because all the obbies I’ve played were pretty basic aswell. I’ve made the stages past 21 more Unique and I’m trying to figure out how to make them look better.
Please check it out.
SheezeBlox
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Perfect! I do think in my opinion, the stages past Stage 21 are good enough (for my standards). Otherwise, now that it’s fixed, I finished the game! 
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