I just finished my first Star Wars thumbnail!! I am open to any feedback! (You can check out the speed art on my YT, NamedGFX!
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The cloak seems a little too wide, and it would be nice if we could see a little bit more of the mask.
Other than that, looks good.
Grade: 85/100
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I think the lightsaber should be brighter. Maybe add white in the middle or something
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good idea, I was trying to figure out how to make it look brighter and more like a lightsaber, so ill try that, thanks!
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I agree lol, when I finished I was looking and all I could see was a tenth of the mask, later on I am prob going to redo this and add in all the suggestions 
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It looks terrific! I’d change the Title’s color from blue to something more climatic. A red color for instance would suit it really well 
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Im not that good with titles lol. That is just my water mark tho
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Great work overall!
If you consider remaking this in the future, try to make the lightsaber brighter, like this:
As you can observe, the middle portion is more white and emits crimson light. Also, remove that:
It feels like the blade is converting into gas at the end. Fix the light emerging from the saber, by adding some bright light source near the blade.
Make the woods darker and the trees a bit taller, so that the light from the lightsaber would look a lot cooler. You may decrease the moonlight here as well if you want.
You might as well do something about this part:
The snowfall here looks really great. Try adding some blur too in photoshop and also try to make the blade of the lightsaber in photoshop too. You can find some tutorials on how to do it. The watermark too, you can try some cooler fonts there.
I am eagerly waiting to see the recreation of this (as you mentioned in your replies).
Other than that…
May the Force be with you.
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A lot of great tips I will look into and I am also really excited to recreate this as well. I did some adjustments from other reply’s but when I recreate this I will reference back to this, thank you!
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So once im done remaking it ill reply to you with the updated version! The one above is not it 
That’s a lot better already!
Keep up with your good work
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I just added a few adjustment layers to your render (I hope you don’t mind it please)
Of course, they are far from perfect but I just wanted to show how cool it would look when done professionally.
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That Is SICK, what adjustments did you add? and how did you get the lightsaber more red?
I did some of my own adjustments, does this look better than my first one? But you got it more red and the other side darker, that just why im wondering what adjustments you used.
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I was just about to comment saying the lightsaber needed some work on it but now I really don’t think it does.
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Yeah, my original lightsaber was really lame lol.
The cape is wide af but apart from that looks good.
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Yeah it covers his whole body 
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I’ve been working on it since you gave the suggestions and here is what ill say is the final product, though if there is anything else you would change I would really appreciate your feedback even more. Thank You!
That is much better, great job!
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