hey.
so i was making a game, where you basically just kill other people but inside of a mall, but i figured spawning already in the mall is kinda’ lame.
i attempted to make a minimalistic spawn area, where you would jump into the pit, and spawn inside of the mall somewhere. intentionally being kinda’ quirky lol.
anything i can do to improve this would help. i’m not a great builder at all so any tips help me.
game link:
https://www.roblox.com/games/8090105836/Happy-Lemonade
thanks. 
Well for starters, I think you should make the spawn have somekind of border. Also, if I’d be the average (kid) roblox player, I would not know how to start playing the game before I try to jump in to the pit randomly. You should add some text like jump in to the pit to start playing, or something. Also, maybe remove the shadow from the clouds, cause it is quite annoying. Yeah so basically just fill everything up a bit more.
I love the map!!! I agree with @ItsLinardinio that u should add a border and stuff but I disagree that you should add text because if you have nothing to do other then jump in a pit and you dont its kinda ur fault
Edit: how did u make clouds
just edited a free-model cloud generator, and made them into squares like minecraft.