Looking for feedback: Ad for my upcoming game

About Me

Hello everyone! I’m Diacritio, a graphical designer for UNexus Studios, a game studio being formed, and a upcoming Freelancer as soon as I finish my Portfolio. I’ve decided to take on the project of building a game called “Stronghound Selection” A single-player game that you can only visit once (first confirming you want to enter and start, of course), and take on the challenge of completing hard to almost impossible levels.

What is the GFX’s goal?

The goal of this GFX was to make the ad viewers feel like they would feel powerful by finishing my game. And I was thinking of placing the intended date of release to hype people up, when I put more and more robux into advertising, the closer it is. I know this date is far, but I decided to do this now rather than later.

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THIS IS A CONCEPT. I KNOW THIS IS NOT IN THE RIGHT FORMAT.
Also: I had a little gunshot wound on the left and right rig, I’m not sure if that’s ok, so I want to know if removing them was necessary!

All feedback and constructive criticism welcome!

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Hey there! I quite like the graphic you’ve made here, I feel that it does indeed give the impression of climbing to the top.

I don’t really have any suggestions for improvement, but I do have a potential idea - If you were to push the darker lighting slightly further into the center & placing it beneath where the characters on the right & left are falling off, it could represent failure too. Just an idea, you don’t need to follow what I’ve said lol.

All the best, good luck!

Hello, just wanna say that I like the concept! Looks pretty neat :slight_smile: here’s some advice:

RENDER I like the character in second place. However, I think that the posing of the character on top could be better, maybe make his arms/legs look more natural because it looks a little stiff. Maybe you could add a little texture to the characters too.

TEXT I think for this, a bigger, bolder text for MAKE YOUR WAY TO THE TOP would be better to put more emphasis on it. You can also add some effects to the text.

EFFECTS Not a biggest fan on the way the characters are blurred, it looks a little unnatural. I feel like the motion blurring/lines effect could be better