Looking for Feedback and Ideas on our Build!

Currently have 2 versions of this build Made by @Innsaei and Myself. looking for feedback and ideas and thoughts :slight_smile:
Our theme is a lost island feel

Here are some screenshots, but you can get a better experience by joining the place
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Places

Place 1. Aurrietty - Roblox

Place 2 (Night) . How'd I end up here? - Roblox

Screenshots

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To me, I don’t think there should be any changes, it looks very beautiful as how it is at the moment! What I mostly love is how the sky looks, it’s very realistic. Also, when it’s night, love how it glows up the whole environment!

Great work to you and your partner! :+1:

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I like it it looks amazing, I also dont think there should be any changes. Hope you can do more amazing work like this.

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Thankyou, I think I will try that for place 1, when it’s night on place 1 it goes almost pitch black. That is place 2 that has the nice glow :smiley:

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The showcase looks amazing, loving the music and environment objects: super vibrant some aspects I’m going to address could be taken however you like.

I’m liking the idea you’re going for is (this suppose to be an island lost in the in the far distance): If this is what you’re trying to achieve:

The ground area, could be placed with a few more objects just to give it more of a lively feel, and could use more detail; I noticed a few of the trees kind of has that repetitive design consider adding variation into them so it doesn’t have a plain look if you know what I mean giving them different angles or have some featuring branches could possibly improve the showcase a little more, a collection of plants bushes, flowers, sticks, ect. Would add a mere detail to the ground.

The small amount of what I’m assuming are the medieval houses if I’m not mistaken (they normally have shingles or tiles instead of a wooden look to it attached, however you probably already noticed that issue) placing some wall lights on the houses could add a bit of realism in a kind of way. There is also a lack of vegetation, placing a few islands around the ocean or rocks could be a nice addition to add.

Overall, putting small objects won’t hurt. Try to make the place to your best of your abilities. :slightly_smiling_face:

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Thankyou so much, Thanks for your ideas, I will definitely be adding more objects and detail, and will be working on some smaller islands and areas around :slight_smile:

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I’m no builder but if I came across this in a game, I would be amazed!

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Thank you so much, still has a lot of work :3

https://www.roblox.com/games/5217979902/E-T-O-I

Updated Place link, Have moved it to a group game :slight_smile:

This is honestly amazing but it seems a bit open, maybe add some carriages or some sort of medieval type scenery to really bring out the overall detail and potential of this build. But Overall this is absolutely amazing.

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wow, thankyou so much, and yes we are working on extra details and items, and new areas to come :3 Tysm

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Np, always glad to help and share my ideas! :smiley:

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