Looking for feedback for my detective visual novel game

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#1

I’ve already made a post about this already but the previous one is outdated. Currently, I am making a detective themed visual novel game and I’ve just finished coding the first section of chapter 1

it is playable and you can play it here:
https://www.roblox.com/games/7271132086/Case-File-1225-Roblox-Visual-Novel-Pre-alpha
brief gameplay:

I’ve gathered feedback and suggestions from multiple social media websites and I thought it would be great if I do it on devforum too : )

if there’s anything you want to suggest or criticize feel free to do so! I’m ready for anything that you can offer

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#2

i think you have already made this post in the past i thinks you shouldnt do it again although its nice

#3

yeah, I know. but it was outdated and it wasn’t getting enough suggestions/ feedbacks to work on