Hello, i recently finished the first rough prototype for my game’s tutorial sequence, players are teleported there upon joining the game for the first time to somewhat present the world they are in and the basic game mechanics and keybinds.
I tried keeping it short while only showcasing the essentials and how you can learn the rest of the controls for yourself, i want feedback for.
A) if the tutorial explains too much/too little.
B) general dialogue quality, i’m not one to usually write dialogue so i’m not sure if it’s conveying the explanations properly.
C) Is intuitive enough, you basically just repeatedly talk to the same NPC and occasionally test out a few controls, but i’m not sure if trying it blind could lead to a softlock or misunderstanding of your goal.
The game link is [Alpha] Danblox - Roblox
you can currently only experience the tutorial once, i’ll probably add a button in the main game so you can replay the tutorial at a later date.
You can leave the feedback in this topic or on the game’s server.