Looking for feedback on a visual novel game concept

hello!! I’m a beginner developer who’s currently trying to work on a detective visual novel game.

this is what I have to show so far:


But with not much scripting or building experience, this is certainly a bit of a challenge. Currently, I use mostly free models and I draw all of the UIs, sprites and scripting.

I wanted to hear some feedback before fully working on this concept, hoping to see if there’s anything that I can improve on :>

Update for those who are still reading this:

here is a more recent preview of my game so far

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This game looks great! I’d love to play it when it comes out.

I have one suggestion for the game:

In situations like when you’re solving a crime or you’re sleeping, you could make it so that the background music gives the same vibe as the situation.

For example, when you’re trying to catch someone, you could play a music that’s filled with adrenaline. It could be fast notes with a short melody. If you’re sleeping, you could play relaxing music.

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Thank you : )

And yes! music and sfx were taken into consideration before the project began. Me and my friend have a playlist of music that hopefully will be used in the future ^ _ ^