Looking for feedback on Gun Store I made for my game!

Hello!

I’ve asked before for your feedback on a 7/11 build I made, and you guys gave me some good feedback, so I decided to ask for some on another, this time a pretty important build for my game! This is the main place where you would purchase weapons in the game, so I want it to look as good as I can possibly make it, so all feedback is welcome!

I will update the list below with changes you all recommend so that we don’t get the same recommendations multiple times.

Changes I plan to make

  • Add stock to the shelves (ammo boxes and such).

  • Fix up the inside of the display stand (give the weapons actual places to sit instead of floating).

Important stuff to note

  • The name of the store will NOT change. It is named after my brother, so I am not willing to change it. Though you can recommend changes to the actual look of sign,

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you should add a window border
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You’re right Thank you; I don’t know how I didn’t think of this myself. Thank you for the suggestion. I will definitely be adding it soon.

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The “Pistols - Rifles - Knifes - and more” text should be a bit smaller and then make the “Cactus Firearms” text larger. I also think that you could add a skirting board and make the ceiling a different colour or change it to a drop in ceiling. The glass on the counter could be a bit more transparent and be a lighter shade of blue. The floor material doesn’t really look good so I suggest changing it to a wood texture or a tiled floor or a carpet texture.

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For the store name you should make the text blue, and have more text behind it that is white. Like white text behind the blue text. I would also say scale down the text. On the inside i would change the floor color to something else. For example white or black. Other then that it looks good!

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After a while, how your weapons store turned out left me curious.:face_with_monocle:

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