Looking for feedback on my adventure/horror story Game, TIME ENDS DEMO

Hi Everyone, I would like some feedback on how the game plays and find any bugs. :happy3:

:warning: This game is only for Laptop or pc :computer:

:warning: IT’S A DEMO GAME ONLY, AND I AM CURRENTLY MAKING THE FULL GAME.:scroll:

THE FULL GAME WILL HAVE LIKE:

  • Main Menu Screen that is Good, and Fix some GUI Screen. :left_speech_bubble:
  • Fix any unknown bugs. :bug:
  • Make the Game good. :+1:
  • Make the game longer :lying_face:
  • And add new maps. :world_map:
  • Choices that will lead to other endings. :raised_hands:
  • Different Endings. :end:
  • SCARY PARTS. :fearful:
  • BOSS FIGHT. :crossed_swords:
  • AND MORE!

I Hope You Like it! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Game Link:

https://www.roblox.com/games/6586737533/TIME-ENDS-DEMO-V1-3

The description, instead making the description telling you how to find secrets, you could make tiny puzzles so the player tries to find the eater eggs.

At the right side of the screen, this door shows a bit of the outside. Shift lock is activated, it could cause glitchers to access places where they shouldn’t, the camera at least makes it hard to glitch but may occur.

After entering that door, if you go up straight, you’ll see a glitching wall, changing the sizes of them could help. You could mention on the description, or ingame that shift to run is possible.

Found this extra walkspeed, the text is too big, also if you shift while having it, the speed will just remove. Maybe make some boost so the speed is less faster, but also temporary.

When getting below a tree the game lagged a bit.

This black barriers makes the yard look less natural, maybe you could be creative and add bushes or walls?

When reseting character, you respawn and there is a chance you get free movement in here.

There are probably more errors or details I haven’t look at, if you need my help to find more of this details tell me, as I can help you :slight_smile:. This is what I found and I think could be changed and/or fixed. Anyways, cool music and cool game until what I saw (Ill try passing it and looking for more details later) @GMOGamer12

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Oh ok thanks for letting me know that. I will fix that later it’s night in my place I have to go back to sleep. :blush:

I will fix that later. :smiley:

More things I’ve found @GMOGamer12 .
The credits may have to be fixed:

The walls are irregular:

There are some walls that are separated just below the door:

Not anchored, also floating:

There is a text: Something “is weird is” going on here, which isn’t correct, and after it I was slow, but after shifting returned to the normal speed.

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You can also see him before accessing the room, also some music started playing when i was stepping here.

The demo ending is poorly made, also a message saying that it is only demo keeps poping up.

Also consider that the ending is kinda long, and you can read the tex without even getting near to it.

Now this last image could just be design, but the door isnt on the middle of the wall, if that was the intention.

After completing this game, i found this because the game doesn’t kick you or anything after completing the cinematic:

In this same place found 2 models from the catalog (Not sure if important glitch, or just background)

A room without almost anything, i guess testing? Also a message about “oh its a kitchen” appeared

Then this message on the window:

Did you guys literally just copy and paste the ending map with the new things ?

Touching this door or baseplate gives you slowness, its impossible to remove do to shift not existing on this ending place.

Restarting character will make you appear out of the baseplate, you could entirely skip the cinematic (Not sure, haven’t tested it, and won’t).

Thats every secret and thing I’ve been able to find, I consider that as small as it is, it could’ve potential but needs to be reworked if you plan launching the game 1st of may.

I will mute this topic, so I won’t recieve notifications about this, good luck with your work!

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Oh ok Thank you for letting me know, and I fixed some stuff. like It kicks you out of the game when It’s done doing the cutscene, Added some walls and bush, and The CREDITS GUI and stuff looks fine to me, and You can’t reset now. :star_struck: :smile: