Looking for Feedback on my Current Roblox Project

[greyastros]

Hi, I started developing a game that lets you track groups across roblox. Before I start advertising my game a lot I’m curious to see what others may think of my game and what I can improve on. No need to be nice, I’m open to taking critisicm as long as it will help me improve aspects of my game.

Screenshots below ↓ ↓

I’m sure there are some(or a lot) of qualities the game lacks that would make it a fun and enjoyable game to play. If there is anything about my post that confuses you let me know and I will clear it up. Thanks!

Group Checker

[macabreroses]

I believe the experience does what it should do. However i think its too structurly simular to friend checker in terms of looks. I believe you can make the overall place look visually appealing rather than a flat surface.

[greyastros]

Hmm ok so should I add more depth and building to the map to make it look nicer?

[Coolsbloxian]

Looks a bit uneven from the pictures, also, you can make it look a bit more “cool” by adding something around the area, not just having it flat. The sky is plain too

But the game looks functional, well done

[macabreroses]

I wouldnt say buildings would be the best fit.

Something like adding a bunch of abstract shapes to give it a weird dimension feel could work.

How about something like this:

[Megalodox_Official (Jevangelise)]

The game might be useful, and it should gain trust from users in the long term, but don’t expect it to blow up, since it’s a utility tool and not a entertaining experience.

[greyastros]

Thanks for the feedback, I didn’t expect this game to blow up because that’s not what i made it for. I hoped to make the game as a way to navigate through groups much easier than the current group system impelmented in the website.

[greyastros]

I added a new look the the builds and design of the game and took your advice. Let me know what you think!

[macabreroses]

Definitely a massive improvement, but it can be better.

I made a quick copy in studio to see how my new improvements would look.

What I did was add a bright fog, but not too foggy because you want to see the group boards clearly.

This is what I set my fog to:

I suggest playing around with the fog settings to your liking.

This is what it looks like from the outside: a huge border around the entire area so you can’t see the skybox. The grey border parts have cast shadows off so the sunlight comes through.

Also, note that I would change the border wall’s transparency to 0 since it has this weird effect when you’re looking at it from different angles.

[greyastros]

So sorry for the late reply (and also for the fact that I’m bumping). I’ve been busy with some other projects and haven’t goten to look at this topic in a while. I’ve just added the features you recommened and it overall made the game look so much nicer! I really appreciate all the feedback I’ve gotten, thanks!