Looking for feedback on my first build

Hello, I am looking for some feedback on this build and I would appreciate your opinion on it for being a first time build.

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You can view the build yourself here:

https://www.roblox.com/games/6182274536/Shed?refPageId=37de7f9e-068c-4107-9357-c1133862aa96

Thanks!

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very nice looking for a first build!

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Looks great the only thing i would change is to lower the windows on the door as in my opinion they are too high up
Looks really great for a first built though great job man

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Very nice for a first build. I would recommend putting more detail to the sides of the house as well as more windows to it’s back face, would also put an angle to the muntin bars, just as details that would possibly improve it. However, as a first build it looks fantastic, nice job :+1:

Awesome! Looks like a classic build too!

Looks great for your first build, good job!

That is amazing for first build! Also, I like it for classic style! Keep up good work! :smiley:

Very good, I like the detail. However, I suggest adding 2 windows on the back side of the shed instead of one… makes it look odd to me. Nice job!

I will definitely try that, thanks.

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I removed the window on the back side and instead put two windows on the sides since they seemed rather bland.

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The build is great for the first time, but i would make the roof an union so those two parts wont glitch in eatchother

ive had plenty of builds getting prepared for Roblox studio and then I’ve had build builds. and for your first real build it isn’t half bad. so I’m not going to comment on the build but ill give you some advice. it takes hours. or days. this seems like its lacking in detail and not because i don’t think you couldn’t of added it, but because maybe you got tired or stopped improving don’t think you are on a time crunch or you are slow. take your time Rome wasn’t built in a day

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That is good for a first build, very basic also.

I’d recommend changing your increments image

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Honestly, it was a combination of being tired, and not knowing what extra details to add on to the build to improve it. That is partially why I made a post about it, to get others opinions and ideas to improve the build, but at the same time I had been working on it for about 2-3 hours and rather go do something else instead of thinking ways to improve/add detail to the build. I will definitely take your advice into consideration next time.

he makes a good point but work on a .5 scale for the most part.