Looking for feedback on my first game (Obby)

I’ve always tried making huge projects, but as of recently I’ve realized I have to start small, so I decided to make an obby, it took about a month to complete. Please send me any criticism, feedback, suggestions, or bugs to help me improve on the game.

Link: Ultra Easy Obby! - Roblox

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Played until round 11. Good work :+1:. Two suggestions. On my phone the top center screen guis were overlapping. Second suggestion is I think players don’t like dying in obbys. So you could code a check to see if they are falling or have touched a hazard part and instead of reducing health just instantly return them to the last checkpoint so they never die. Speeds up the game especially when someone falls off the side.

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First of all, good work! For your first game, this seems to be really fun and catchy, but I have a few suggestions:

  • The UI should be a bit smaller, it seems really invading imo
  • If the player falls, you should just make them return to the last checkpoint immediatedly but that is for you to choose.

Overall, i enjoyed it!

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I appreciate the feedback, I’ll make sure to implement your suggestions. But just one question, I’ve tried fixing those gui on mobile, but i’m not sure how to do it, do you know how I could go about that?

This was actually pretty fun, main things are the UI is kind of intrusive and the void is a bit too deep.

You can fix the void with game.Workspace.FallenPartsDestroyHeight and set it much higher and make respawning instant with game.Players.RespawnTime

Other than that has the makings of a fun obby, keep it up Captain

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Instead of using the offset to size your UI, use the scale in size, you might need a plugin

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I already did that before, but it’s still the same thing.

this looks great! just a few suggestions, the ui text was overlapping, even on PC, and on stage 12, the sections are close enough together that you can almost completely skip the level


also, my avatar’s proportions were all off and looked insanely small compared to the obby. other than that, i think this game has potential!

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