Looking for Feedback on my Karate Dojo

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#1

Kon’nichiwa! Hello there! Thanks for stopping by my feedback topic. I would like to give you an example of one of my builds, a Karate Dojo!

The inspiration behind this is from Karate Kid, where the whole dojo is a calming place full of nature. I also wanted to give an extra Japanese temple twist, and I hope you enjoy my build!

Please, feel free to give me your feedback and suggestions on how to improve or any bugs you can find. If you need any extra pictures or references, please do not hesitate to reply below!

I will be showing you the exterior for now, as I plan to build the interior later.

Enough of me chatting, here are the pictures!

(Time: 2 hours)

BridgeSide
BridgeSide1225×712 148 KB
DojoBack
DojoBack1396×799 132 KB
DojoTop
DojoTop636×637 66.1 KB
Entrance
Entrance1387×676 161 KB

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#2

Personally, I think it looks a little bland. Maybe add more detail to it, and maybe some custom textures?

Just like something from the toolbox

Aside from that, it looks really good! I have a question. How long did it take to make?

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#3

Thank you for the feedback! I will try to add more textures to the build.

It took me 2 hours to build. (2 hours not including a break due to me having dinner)

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#4

I like it so far. I’d make the top part of the roof a bit taller, and maybe use a darker shade of white for the cobblestone at the front entrance. Definitely do what Dorthsky said though, add some more details, and try out some custom textures.

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#5

Thank you for the feedback! I will try to re-texture and materialize the parts that needs it.

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