Looking for feedback on my obby!

Hey! I’m trying to get some feedback on the first level of the obby that I’m creating. This is what I have so far. Players must avoid the toys, as they are kill bricks. So, what do you guys think?

Please correct me if I’m posting this in the wrong way, this is the first topic that I have created.

Edit: Changed the download to screenshots, these images show the first and second levels.

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I believe this should go in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations.

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Thanks for the response, I changed it. Hope it’s better now :slight_smile:

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Its pretty cool and creativity nice job :+1:

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I believe that’s the early stage, looks good so far. I really love the idea of the spinning checkpoints! :slightly_smiling_face:

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They were included in the checkpoint kit I used, I think they’re cool too :slight_smile:

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That must be the “Packstabber obby kits” if im right I could remember I also used some of the items when I was making my obby game too. :thinking:

Goodluck on the obby game!

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Could you put a link instead of a download?

I do not usually consider downloading something random on my computer.

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It would actually be better if you sent us the link of the game instead of the link.

The game hasn’t been released, but I’m removing the download and adding images right now.

This is AMAZING. How long did it take to make this?

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It’s fair. You should make the obby a bit longer and there are small corrections like the door in last pic not being centered to the wall and the toys are a little repetitive. Perhaps update this topic when it’s more completed, looks like your average obby otherwise. Good work

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I made all of this last night, I’ll be working more for the next few weeks :slight_smile:

Looks fine, but maybe you could make each shelf in the first photo have different items on them, so the game looks less dull… You could also add a ceiling to each level so players can’t cheat lol.

Working on making each shelf unique, and it’s unfinished so I haven’t added a ceiling yet. Thanks for the feedback!

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No problem! Remember to add lights to the ceiling!

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Well I think you’re doing a great job and you should keep up the good work. :+1:

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