I’m looking for feedback on my upcoming tycoon “Garden Center Tycoon”!
It is about building a greenhouse to sell plants. You can see pictures of the current tycoon below.
I am looking for some feedback such as suggestions for plants/decorations to add, as well as what you think of how it looks so far. Even just a little feedback is super helpful in creating this hopefully awesome game!
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The interior is decent, but you should tone down the brightness of your game because it will hurt your eyes specially at night. You should make outdoor plot that would be cool!
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I agree, the environment is too bright, so maybe some “color balancing”(?) would work.
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I also have some boxes with plants on the roof, but I plan on adding a farm/garden update sometime
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It looks quite alright, suggestions have already been made by other Developers who have replied before me!
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Hello @StopMo_Gamer.
This tycoon looks great As mentioned above, the overall brightness could be balanced. The modeling and building look very complete and intricately designed/thought out.
A few suggestions that I have for you to consider:
Wall Decor
The general look of the tycoon looks great, however, some of the walls could still use extra features. Paintings, plants, lighting, designs, etc. could all be put on walls and squeeze as much money/work from the player as possible.
Floor Features
The floor of the tycoon, based on the images, looks sort of bland. Adding in extra buttons, spawners, pots, boxes/crates, items, etc. will all help to bring the floor space to life.
Planned Layout
The current layout of the building looks very open and spacious. Even with the addition of some of the above floor features, the main room still looks too open.
EX: The tables are each housing a single plant, but are spread way out, leaving a huge hole in the middle. My solution: Create a large, square table that houses all of the plants rather than four different tables. This way, you could create even more tables to create even more tasks for the player to accomplish. Again, this would help to get the player to work even harder/spend more time in your game/buy more money with Robux.
Great game. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for all the tips! I’ll try to keep you posted on what I add based on your suggestions.
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