I am working on a game called Rambo and am currently building a map for the game. I want feedback on the build and if I should add anything. This was going to be a mini-shopping mall complex. (nowhere near finished, you’re reply would be awesome)
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Looks good, but the front windows are black while the others are glowing white. I would make them all match.
Hey! The map looks great so far, although I suggest toning down the neon on the windows. It’s a little too bright! Maybe a bit more colors added to the building as well! Other than that it looks great! 
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I’ll do that right now. Thanks!
Here is what you should change and or interpret in my opinion just by the looks of the image attached to your topic above:
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The front windows look odd since the rest of the windows are neon white with a white or gray outline. I suggest sticking to one outline for all the windows and either have them all the same color and material or none at all.
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Make the title displayed (RAMBOMART) not crooked it just makes it look sloppy.
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Add some sidewalks.
This is just to help you out and not to be rude in any way!
Thanks !, I’m adding the sidewalks now.
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For starters, Great build!
But I have a few critiques,
•The neon “rambomart” sign could stand to be a slightly darker color.
•The same with the windows maybe.
•Also the window next to the door dont match the same neon as the ones on the side and upper levels so maybe change that.
But all in all a great build keep it up!
(Also is the game based on the movie Rambo? Lol)
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Lol no, just a name I came up with lol. Thanks though for the feed back!