I made a cafe as more of a way to practice and test myself as to what I could achieve, looking for feedback on the exterior only. Spent 2-3 hours on this.
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Can u provide more shots? You can’t really see much from this angle.
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Sadly I’m not home at the moment, when I get home I should be able to take some more
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Alternatively, I just realized I had published it to a game. This version might look weird because i was doing interior work, but it should be fine
To start, the grey walls look very boring: maybe consider adding some sort of pattern or texture to them.
I though that the smaller parts on the wooden pillars blended right into the bigger, interior part. This could be solved by changing the colors around a tiny bit just to create some contrast between the parts.
I would also suggest adding some flooring and some lanterns/lamps on or around the tables.
The windows, rails, and tables all look nice though. Yes, all the things that are completely exterior are the things I don’t think need to be changed very much.
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Forgot to mention I was going off of a picture I found on google-but I totally see what you mean for all of those. Here’s the thing I was going off of
I think your getting pretty close, but it could use some work judging by the screenshots. Add more detail and you’ll get it.
Exactly what I was thinking, couldn’t have said it better.
Also, is all of the grey the same material? If so, maybe try to change the materials up for different parts of the building. (floor, roof, etc.)
If you’re going off of that picture strictly, it looks like the ‘inside’ of the exterior is white. So maybe make a thin plating type part, and perhaps some reflectance.
Are you selling this? I would like to buy it for 
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