Looking for Feedback on WW1 American Expeditionary Force "Doughboy" Character Model

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This is my first Topic/Post I made on the Dev Forum. :slight_smile:
Hello there! I made a WW1 American “Doughboy” Webbing/Character Model a few weeks ago before joining the Dev Forum. I would like some feedback on it. Please be honest and give criticism. The gun models are built by me, I might make a separate post on gun models some day.

American 1
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Infantry/Support. The Pose he is doing is actually inspired by the pose the Support Class does in Battlefield 1

fixed arm
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Fixed Arm Now he has a WW1 club on his left hand.

Harlem
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369th Infantry Regiment “Black Rattlers” "Harlem “Hellfighters” Infantry soldier.

webbing
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Webbing without Humanoid Roblox Character.

Note: The helmets and clothing are not created by me, I only made the Soldier Webbing. I will credit the Original Creators. The Brodie Helmet is actually an UGC item I owned made by John Drinkin, known for making Military hats.

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#2

They look pretty good, the officers arm is down wayyyyy to low.

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#3

Thanks for the Feedback! I might post a new screenshot later with the arm fixed.

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#4

I like the webbing and the gun