Here is an add that I’m going to upload but first i need some feedbacks (I made it)
Hello,
Overall this is a decent
But I think you could do better on originality like maybe make the color of the text big and popping out, as in a better color that suits the ad. You can’t really see the text if your just scrolling through Roblox games. The ad also needs a bit more taste, because on the context of the ad it’s not very clear.
About originality, I think you should add more. It kinda looks like every other add you see. I’m not sure what your capability is but I hope you like this feedback even when I sound a bit harsh.
Overall it’s good just make sure people actually notice it 
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Nice but I would change the thought clouds from black to white.
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Maybe make the text more visible?
Also add a background to the chat bubbles.