[sry for bad english]
I would really like general feedback like improvements, bugs, UI design, or suggestions of my game in it’s current state.
Would you play it?
Yes? -Why
No? -Why
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Yes, I would play it for the grained and for the leveling up the.
In other case no, because I can just play Murder Mystery 2 or Murder Mystery X they are all the same. I think most people want a game something like Murder Mystery but something they have never seen before.
Thanks for reading have a great day.
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Thank you!
What about the UI design?
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The Ul design looks great I may play some more just because I love these Murder Mystery Games.
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I was only able to spawn in the lobby. It kept saying it was waiting for players…the lobby was pretty simple, I’d suggest adding somethings to make the lobby more entertaining. Also, when I spawned in I didn’t have any clothes on (???). But the UI design was great 
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I got into a game with one other player and the first thing I heard was a “ding” and I figured out that when anyone collects a coin, everyone can hear the sound it makes. I would HIGHLY recommend making that a local sound, just for the player who collects it since it was very distracting when playing. I would also move the end game timer to the top of the screen so it’s not in the way. I like the map for the most part, I kinda find it neat for the killer to come out of that box. I like the tree that was made with parts but the other trees with decals as leaves seem to be out of place. Playing as the killer can be seen as fun at first but due to the one basic knife weapon, it may be a bit boring or frustrating. I would diversify the weapons (if you have, you can ignore this).
The lobby needs some work in my opinion, I think that there needs to be a way to get back up onto the spawn area when you jump down in the water. Right now you have to jump up repeatedly to try to get back up. I would also recommend putting more detail into the lobby, maybe add stuff to keep the player busy while they are waiting like a physical shop for upgrades or loot boxes. In the inventory section, I would change how the loot boxes appear. I think it would be better to show all the loot boxes you have instead of all the possible loot boxes in the game (This could help later when scaling the game). Another thing about inventory, in Skins, it says “Next site” and I don’t really understand what that means as a player. It seems to behave as a button to show more skins on different pages so I would change the wording on that. Other things about the UI are the buttons on the left side of the screen need some padding so the text isn’t pressed against the walls of the button. Some space there would make them look nicer.
My last thing will be about waiting for players to join. What if one player wants to play and no one else is on? This would be an issue with a game with a smaller player base. Maybe you could add an alternative mode to this where one player goes against A.I if no other players are on? I think something is needed to allow the player to stay on while other players may hop on if they see someone.
As a conclusion, this game has potential but it needs a lot of work. I hope you continue working on this and work hard on this.
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I would give the game atleast a 3/5,and I understand it is only the start,so I hope you can read some things I liked and disliked in your game
What I Liked
-Amazing Map
-Lobby does the job of a lobby,a bit sparse,but will do
-Amazing UI
-Liked the concept of crates in the game
What I disliked
-Make a better thumbnail so the game does stand out
-The murderer can hear the survivors collect the coin.It is quite loud,so it does give it away
-Don’t use decals - ie the boxes or the trees
-The map does need hiding places,ie make the shelves be distance apart to allow players stay away
Of course,this is the beginning for you so I wish you the best in luck in the future to you and your team and I hope this game excels.I gave the game a favourite to keep track,so again this is the beginning.
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Thanks for your feedback 
idk why you dont had any clothes on? xD
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Thanks for your feedback!
No players here?
My last thing will be about waiting for players to join. What if one player wants to play and no one else is on? This would be an issue with a game with a smaller player base. Maybe you could add an alternative mode to this where one player goes against A.I if no other players are on?
I am currently working on bots
who play like normal players
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Thanks for your feedback
Design
Make a better thumbnail so the game does stand out
-Im the baddest Designer ever lol xD
Sound
The murderer can hear the survivors collect the coin.It is quite loud,so it does give it away
-I will change it thanks
Decals
Don’t use decals - ie the boxes or the trees
-I will tell it to my Builder
Hiding Places
The map does need hiding places,ie make the shelves be distance apart to allow players stay away
-We are working on new Maps
Thank you for your feedback
No idea! 
It was so weird. I didn’t know if that was part of the game or a glitch…
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I changed the game Icon and Thumbnail
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Yes,I just saw,I love it :D,keep it up
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Alright, all of these comments are true. (sorry for late response)
The UI design is nice, but like all feedback there are downsides! Right now, you have implemented suggestions. As a Developer, its your job to constantly update the game or the playerbase loses interest. Without players, you lose money if thats what your going for.
Though bugs are patched, the game is private???