I feel like there’s 100 million typos
Chapter 3:
You wake up to your clock in your warm bed as if nothing happened, as if it was a dream. Still confused about what had happened, you have a quick breakfast and head to school. Before you leave the house it’s implied through a news paper or TV that crime rates have gone up a crazy amount in the past 24 hours Throughout the entire day, something weird keeps happening; you had heavy amounts of homework that you were supposed to do and the teachers are acting weird. When going to the bathroom or changing classes, you might see a silhouette very briefly darting across the hall.
Being a human, you try to forget what supposedly happened in a dream last night but physically can’t due to how real it felt.
You decide not to take the bus home just because why not? Since it’s winter, the sun sets earlier, and because of that, it’s dark outside. This night felt different; it was noticeably darker outside, and the air just felt weird breathing in. The air smelled smokey once you got closer to your house; I don’t know how the player will know that, though.
Passing by many houses in your neighborhood feels like somethings off, none of the lights are on, there’s less cars than normal, there’s no people to be seen, and you constantly feel like you’re being watched. On one occasion, a recycling bin should fall over behind the player, and multiple times, a set of eyes should be seen through the windows of some random house for a split second.
When you’re about to turn left on the corner to see your house 80 feet away, you instead decide to run because you see the side walk is illuminated by what seems to be fire. You can’t be sure, so you run anyway. Once you hit the corner, you see two fire trucks in front of your house and an ambulance thrown in. You run as fast as you can to your house to make sure everything’s ok…
You see that there is no one there; you are getting really worried seeing no one is helping the fire you make the quick decision to run inside the house while carrying your water bottle because you think it can save you from the fire. You look left and right for your parents or siblings, but they’re nowhere to be seen. You kick down a few burning doors and possibly even a wall just to make sure they’re not in the house.
The players’ screen will slowly lose color and gain heavy amounts of DoF due to CO2. I don’t know if it does that in real life. Since they’re nowhere, you run to the front door of the house but as you’re leaving, a part of the house comes falling and knocks you out.
Chapter 4:
You wake up tied to a chair against a wall in some warehouse. Now what? You look to your left and to your right to see shelves over 50 feet tall with pallets and boxes and other stuff. These shelves are around 8 feet away from where you’re sitting and also the warehouse is well lit with white lighting.
You hop your chair over to the shelf on the left to try and rub the rope against the box, and soon later, you’re out.
You use stuff you find in the warehouse to your advantage. You find an expensive knife and an airsoft gun with 800 BBs. All you care about is to get out and get back home, even though you don’t have a home at the moment.
The lights randomly go out for a split second, and then a millisecond later it comes back on. Well, something not so good happened. The figure jumped behind you, so out of instinct, you stab it several times with the knife you found, and it screams. The scream echos through the warehouse, and moments later, it disappears. It didn’t die though and that’s what worrys you
you then do some stuff find a room idk then you fight some boss idk also add jumpscares throughout
I can’t think of anything else for chapter 4 because I’m tired…
Good luck with your game
! Thank you for the suggestions i will keep these in mind as I develop the game.