Looking for some ways to improve my map

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#12

Welcome!

Your map looks absolutely amazing.

Maybe you could possibly add more trees, and maybe even a few dead bushes. You could also potentially add random strands of rope.

Overall your build is absolutely amazing, keep up the great work! :slight_smile:

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#13

Welcome to the DevForum!
The build you came up with. Looks really detailed and amazing like everything in the map such as the lava, rocks, boxes.

Here is a few ideas i got for your map to look more decent.

Suggestions

  • Add some dead broken trees with cracks, on the branches and branches on the ground.

  • Add some cracks in the rocks, and terrain part to look more decent instead of having normal rocks.

  • And some bones inside the rocks and on the ceiling part. To look more like the place has been there for a while! and implement different shapes, of rocks like black burned rocks in the lava area.

Overall, your build is looking really decent. You have done a incredibly job on it hope to see the final product soon!!

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#14

Great suggestion, thank you! I appreciate it.

#15

Awesome! Thank you for giving your input!

#16

Will do! I think the rope adds a good touch. :smile:

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#17

You’re absolutely correct. I think that the darker rocks will make the lava look more realistic!

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#18

No problem! Keep up the good work. :smiley:

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#19

I’ll try my best! :dark_sunglasses:

#20

Out of curiosity, if this is for a game in development when will it be out?

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#21

The game is currently out. The map that I’m currently building will be a feature for the upcoming update.

#22

Looks great to me I love detail and the lava:
The walls could use more details tho, like cracks or dead vines
Looks great over all tho!

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#23

Yeah, that’s what I was thinking as well. The walls look kinda dead. Thanks for the feedback!

#24

Alright great, I definitely want to check it out

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#25

Okay! I’ll get back to you with the link once I’m done with the map.

#26

I’m a few hours later than some, but others have mentioned the bones. I think these give the map a true danger feel, as if there were previous adventurers. Perhaps consider adding some smaller bones around in random areas, maybe a few close to each other to show a group of adventurers.

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#27

I agree. I’m in the process of adding more stuff right now.

#28

Sounds great! I wish you the best of luck.

#29

I agree with your point, adding smaller bones and some other types of bones would make the game have a “true danger feel” :smiley:

#30

My personal opinion is that “true danger” feelings (especially in what I would assume is an adventure map) is something that really gets people hooked on the map and it’s design.

#31

Here’s the game.
There are a few minor bugs, which are listed in the description.
https://www.roblox.com/games/1442533291/Update-The-Minigame-Elevator-Beta

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