Hey everybody! Today I decided to make a quick and simple low-poly hotel. I think I am happy with it but a few mistakes on the billboard. He are some pictures, please give some feedback! Also you can watch the video of me making it if you want. Anyways enjoy!
You can watch the video here:Low Poly Hotel Speed Build | ROBLOX STUDIO - YouTube
All of this was made by me and nobody else. It isn’t perfect since I was under time pressure. I wanted to see how far I could get with it under 20 minutes.
Hi, your Low-Poly Hotel looks very simple and cartoonish!
Though I would really appreciate it more if you could add some reflective appearance for the windows, also it wouls be better if you could make the wall’s material look more brick.
Also, make the entrance door for your hotel to be also glass, since all hotel entrance are normally made with glass material, and for the final touch maybe add some sign that says ‘Open’ to make the Hotel look attractive for players to look like.
Overall, I appreciate the work you did and I hope you apply this to a game that requires a hotel.
Thanks for your feedback I will definitely learn from it… Do you mind like is the sign good? I think I messed it up when I was making it. One side looks abit more wide… Anyway thanks for your feedback!
Well, actually your hotel sign looks good though I would recommend if you could add some lights for the sign. Similar to the signs in theaters like this.
To me, this doesn’t look like a hotel no offense but it isn’t even close, it looks like a shop though. You should try making the rooms bigger and replace the idk what it is called lol but i will say it is a rain cover with a metal-looking one.
Looks pretty neat so far, but the cylinders on the sight might be too big in my opinion.
Try making a low polsy based off popular or known buildings as for some advanced training :)!
Really look the cartoony look your hotel gives off and the colours look great!
Here are some things you can change:
The window in the top middle isn’t directly in the middle but nearer towards the left, if you can see.
The windows at the bottom’s scaling are odd, the windows would supposedly come to the rigs ankles if you were to spawn in the game. Try changing the scale of the windows.
If you have more time, try adding another story since you’re making a hotel.
Thanks so much for your feedback. I will make sure to use your tips. This Hotel was really just for fun since I was bored. But… I may use this in the future while using your tips.
I really like the model although I do think the yellow and blue should be a tiny bit darker as they are very distracting. Unless that is intentional I recommend you do that.
This is very good considering this was made under 20 mins. I like the cartoonish look you went for and the sign looks amazing as well. Some things you could add will be words on the sign and decoration to the sign itself. Also, the yellow and blue thing(I forgot what it’s called), should be lengthened as it’s not quite covering the left side.
Nice work! Only thing I would change may be some of the colors, as I just thing the blue and yellow don’t match with the color scheme of the entire building. Keep up the good work!