Hey! So I just recently finished this low poly school that I’ve been working on and I think it turned out pretty well! I would appreciate some feedback on it to see if there is anything I can improve on. I just started building recently.
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the school looks great but I kinda wondering what kind of school size so small?
hm…
kindergarden?
anyway the school look simple can you try adding more on your school like my build in my portfolios:
so… I perhaps you try putting more at the back of your entry school like this picture so yeah very good job and always see you next time for more build a building
Seeya!
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Thanks for the feedback! Though, it’s not really for a game, I just built it because I was bored. There is no interior because it’s just for looks. But if I ever do make a real school I will definitely put more at the back and make it bigger.
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It looks pretty good. Though at the top of the roof you have added a part underneath the wedges. Is this because it’s different in size perhaps? I’d only try to increase the size and railing as the railing looks like its about knee height
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I’ve removed the tag from the title–that’s what the “optional tags” section is for. 
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All the windows look the same, maybe for the top window, make it a different shape or bigger or smaller?
You should probably add a flat part for the “handle” like in this picture:
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Maybe add some things outside like a pathway to the school and some flowers, otherwise it looks excellent, keep up the good work.
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It’s a very interesting build, you can see where you put some effort in some areas, however there are a few spots that should be changed in my opinion. It’s a very appealing build and I think it’s great!
Something about the color is a bit off I don’t think making the entire building one color looks that appealing, try changing the text color to something more natural at the moment it’s the same color as the roof definitely go for more vibrant colors to have a better look at it you should place objects on the exterior like trash cans, fountain, trees, bushes, flag sign, ect.
I will try using brighter colors (especially on the building). A small suggestions: aim for warm, vibrant colors, add something in the background (maybe a trees or football field), you could get some ideas in some reference images to get the full detail or look at existing builds and see what kind of color scheme they have small objects could improve the overall design you could use images for inspiration.
Other than that it’s a good build.
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