Hello everyone. Im new here and just received my member rank yesterday. This is my first topic here to show you one of my builds.
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I like, it. It’s pretty neat and low poly. Only feedback is that the blur doesn’t really fit a low poly build. Overall it’s pretty good!
Keep it up!
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Nice and smooth, although I do have a few suggestions: The corner bricks look too flat you should try spacing them out throughout the build with keeping that scale your wanting, the bricks look more like a (Clip Spring Bend Part) which uses similar designs switch it up a bit try moving your bricks around and have a bit more depth placed into it bricks aren’t normally suppose to be flat.
Perhaps you could choose a more appealing color such as grey or something that fits the build. Mind explaining what shop this is street cafe, store?
Try adding grids on the windows placing some sort of design on the windows would look more interesting it wouldn’t be good having the windows feature the same appearance, try throwing another shade of color on the building so the build doesn’t just feature a blue color. You’ll see shops feature different selections I’m assuming it’ll look better if that was implemented.
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Ok, thanks for the feedback. Im just imagining those ideas on to my build and they would make it better
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Thank you for the feedback. 30 chars
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Hey! Welcome! lol
I think you did an awesome job! Low poly is my favorite and I absolutely love your build. You have just the right amount of details, I especially love the door and the awnings over the windows!
The only thing that sticks out to me is the hedge on the side of the building. I like the planter, it’s just the shape of the hedge that doesn’t feel quite right.
But over all, I think you did a fantastic job! Keep it up! 
Il change it. Thank you for your feedback.
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Good job. I think I prefer the first picture though. I’d replace the glass at the bottom of the door with a doggy door as it doesn’t really make sense to have glass there.
You should add glaze to the window (white stripes)
I’d recommend reading the rules as replying stuff like “thanks for the feedback” is against the rules due to redundancy. Hope this helps!
Ok thanks, i didnt know lol. Ive already added glaze to the windows and il change to door. Im not yet use to low poly.
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