So this is a minor project I made in less than 15 minutes which I wanted to have criticism on. It’s not much, but I say it looks pretty darn good!
Please give feedback!
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PS: You should probably check out the game to get the full effect on the build!
WARNING! LAG FEST!
It’s a very nice build, however I doubt this took you (or could take anyone) only 15 minutes.
That aside, I would just edit those fake sun rays you made a little bit to seem more realistic… the animation isn’t realistic, so I would think about changing that as well. Otherwise, it’s nice for low-poly!
EDIT: Change up some rocks and trees a bit… they seem too blocky.
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Very good, don’t think it’s possible it only took you 15 minutes to make this but alright. The swaying is a very nice touch to it. Makes the game feel calm and peaceful. 
Two suggestions I have are that:
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Have a little less animation. I like the swaying and all, but it’s a bit excessive.
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Add invisible boundaries to the outside of the build and/or make the map larger.
Anyhow, the build is really well made and creative! Good work!
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I think there’s some free models in here. Nice build though.
It’s a very nice place. Apart from the sun rays which give me a weird feeling when moving the camera and the water that has too much reflection and no transparency. Also, you should put less animations if you consider making a game with builds like this. Keep up the good work!
Isn’t that… 2 hours and 16 minutes?
Anyway, very cool place. Some criticism could be the rocks - they are only rectangular. Maybe some could have chips in them or cracks, or some kind of changing to look less cube-like, to fit the rest of the theme. Same with the grass.
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OH SORRY I must have misread that ya it was 2 hours and 16 minutes thx
Hello, nice overall build. I like how you used Tween I’m guessing to do those trees.
Just like @jvstaldjni mentioned, I’m assuming you can 3D model, so maybe make the rocks in Blender Or whatever 3D program you use so it looks more like lowpoly and not “blocky”.
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The rocks were made straight in roblox so that’s why there blocky, I’ll be fixing up the place right now