Good evening, I just built this quick scene. This is my first time on the low-poly side of the building and would like some feedback. It took me about 30 minutes to build using a .5 increment and .2 and .1 increment for details.
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Hey there I personally do not have much feedback to give but I will try to give as much as possible…
Firstly, The Trees are nice however repetitive and boring; I would experiment with different sized trees maybe with different colours, placing multiple trees together in a formation rather than being placed randomly alone, adding foliage beneath trees to make them more detailed and interesting and to centre them upright as it’s unrealistic that a tree tilts with the terrain however looking at it now it just may be the camera angle which makes one of the trees look like it tilts with the terrain.
Secondly, Foliage. Sure its a snowy scene but their should see be plenty of foliage. Add more rocks of different colour, size and quantity, Bushes of different colour, size and quantity, Sparce flowers/grass of different colour, size and quantity and the list goes on. Generally speaking the ground at the moment is very boring and flat which could be solved by adding more foliage to the ground itself.
Thirdly, Personally speaking, and im not sure if anyone else thinks this, but i think mixing textures with smooth plastic looks bad unless the texture is for the ground as at the moment it looks like the building is a mix of styles which i think doesn’t work especially with mixing no texture and textures.
Another point will be about the cabin, it just needs more minor details and for an example maybe think about adding things like lanterns, a pair of skis laying against the wall, a couple of crates out the front and maybe add things like hanging lights from the support beams.
Lastly, You should centre larger rocks together in sparce areas. What i mean by this is atm you have medium-large rocks all over the place which in my view dosent look as good if you have a rock mound somewhere with the medium-large rocks where they currently are being replaced with small stones/rocks which could also form things like a path.
That’s it for now, If you want any more details feel free to reply and ask me.
Here is an image of a quick build i made about 2 hours ago which shows what i mean by a few of the things is stated:
(One of the trees look like its levitating slightly but its not)
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