M79 Render feedback!

Heya fellas! I have been making an M79 model for my game and would like feedback on it!
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Changes V1
Added hook to the handle and fixed handle topology.
Changed V2
Fixed joint between barrel and handle. Added wooden part to barrel as “grip”.

Please not that I am very new to blender.

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It’s all really smooth, but at the grip part it has some sharp bumps on it, which catches my eye, but other than that look great, and Is the grip in the correct side, cause imagine putting it on your shoulder, the ending would go up, which would look weird : D

Wait. What? Can you please specify a bit more so I can fix it as soon as possible? : D

It’s just my opinion, but google shotgun stock for example, and compare it to yours

Its not a shotgun its a 40 mm single-shot, shoulder-fired, break-action grenade launcher. Also I am starting to see that the grip feels a bit too smooth. I would be adding a bit scars? and fixing the edges up a notch! Thanks for feedback!

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Yeah i just looked it up, to me, it looks weird even in real photo XD, so i guess that’s just my eyes

Yea… Not really a good gun in aesthetics for a quite many people but personally I just… LOVE IT. Especially the bloop sound it makes when fired. Like bloop and that house is gone.

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Pretty good for a beginner, but it lacks details and the handle of the gun has got mesh errors

Can’t say your wrong. Ill try to add more detail by sculpting a few scars. And yea the handle topology is messed up.

@AndriusAzaz and @richdefentt. I have updated the topic with the latest image that I hope fits your opinions of the handle having weird and glitchy topology.

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what game is it? looks like a fun game

It looks a lot better now! tho that new thing might still be on shade flat? Just maybe, but everything else looks good to me, and now i even like how the ending looks

Yay! Lets go.

@Realgoodguyalways I will let you know when it drops.

This M79 render looks VERY good! It has a good amount of detail. Nice job on it!

Thank you! I will be adding a few more to make it match as closely as I can! Also improving my blender knowledge along the way.

Nicely done. Adding that bevel and smoothing to the stock has really improved the look and aesthetic of the model. There’s not much I can suggest to improve considering it’s beginner - it’s a pretty solid piece! Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future, best of luck learning Blender :+1:

Thanks! You too! I will make sure to make a bunch of more explosives models… literally. Like I am planning on making the M203.